Question

英语短文改错 高分！

There are 10 easy-to-find mistakes in the following three paragraphs. Please underline the mistakes and put them right. (改错。找到一个错误并改对，得1分；找到错误但没有改对，得0.5分。满分10分) 。
My interest with computers began with video games I used to play at a local shopping mall. My parents disliked these games, and perhaps this dislike explains why they refuse to take computers seriously. Personal computers that operate as word processors and do other jobs look to them like mechanical games. Same do the pocket calculators my friends and I use to do math.
A word processor I used in my senior year to write papers for English may explain this suspicion. A word processor is a small computer program to work like a typewriter. The keyboard is similar to a typewriter. The major difference is that in a processor “function keys” do many more jobs. Specifically, the typed words appear on the “monitor” or screen above the keyboard, and since you “edit” these words on the screen, the processor has extra keys that erase words or whole lines or move it to other places in the paragraph or essay. The other convenience is that corrected pages don’t have to be retyped. The processor has an attached printer and press a button transfers the text on the screen to “hard copy” – computer jargon for typed copy produced by the printer.
Processors thus make the job of writing look easy. One of my teachers objected that a paper I wrote on a processor looked as if a bank statement; he was objecting to the broken letters that a cheap “dot-matrix” printer like mine produces. He didn’t want to tell me his real objection – that writing a paper should not be easy. He obviously assumed that the processor and printer made the writing easy by doing the work. But the printer doesn’t write the paper, it just reproduces what I write with the processor. The real work is in writing the paper and editing the words on the screen. In fact, the ease of making corrections with a processor give me greater control over my writing. I didn’t use to proofread a paper to avoid having to edit a page or retype it. The processor encourages me to look for mistakes.
问题就是这样的 后面没有划线 一句话有可能有1-2个错误 只要找出10处就可以了

Answer 1

疯了！

Answer 2

请检查动词的过去式，说不过来

Answer 3

这是自己写的文章吗？还是哪个试卷上搞下来的，如果是试卷上的话，肯定在文中的十行后有划线，确定是那一行错的瓦，拜托题目完整点。

Answer 4

My interest with computers 【have been beginning】 with video games I used to play 【it】at a local shopping mall. My parents disliked these games, and perhaps this 【ieda】 【show】 why they refuse to take computers seriously. Personal computers that operate as word processors and do other jobs look them【to】 like mechanical games. Same do the pocket calculators my friends and I 【did】math.
A word processor I used in my senior year to write papers for English may explain this suspicion. A word processor is a small computer program to work like a typewriter. The keyboard is similar to a typewriter. The major difference is that in a processor “function keys” do many more jobs. Specifically, the typed words appear on the “monitor” or screen above the keyboard, and since you “edit” these words on the screen, the processor has extra keys that erase words or whole lines or move it to other places in the paragraph or essay. The other convenience is that corrected pages don’t have to be retyped. The processor has an attached printer and press a button transfers the text on the screen to “hard copy” – computer jargon for typed copy produced by the printer.
Processors thus make the job of writing look easy. One of my teachers objected that a paper I wrote on a processor looked as if a bank statement; he was objecting to the broken letters that a cheap “dot-matrix” printer like mine produces. He didn’t want to tell me his real objection – that writing a paper should not be easy. He obviously assumed that the processor and printer made the writing easy by doing the work. But the printer doesn’t write the paper, it just reproduces what I write with the processor. The real work is in writing the paper and editing the words on the screen. In fact, the ease of making corrections with a processor give me greater control over my writing. I didn’t use to proofread a paper to avoid having to edit a page or retype it. The processor encourages me to look for mistakes.
这写的是很么破玩意儿，还不如中文直接反过来呢，看着都恶心

Answer 5

第一段explains-------explained
refuse-------refused
same (do）

第二段papers (for) english------in
erase words or whole lines or move (it)------them
The processor has an attached printer and (press) a button (transfers) the text on -------presses to transfer
第三段 looked as (if) a bank statement-------去掉if
like (mine) produces-------my
with a processor （give）-------gives

My interest with computers With改成IN

computers seriously. Personal computers that operate as word processors and do other jobs

And删掉

Suspicion. A word processor is a small computer program to work like a typewriter. The

改To work为Working
I wrote on a processor looked as if a bank statement; he was objecting to the broken letters

As if 改成 Like

that a cheap “dot-matrix” printer like mine produces. He didn’t want to tell me his real

ProduceS改成Produced

processor give me greater control over my writing. I didn’t use to proofread a paper to avoid

Proofread改成Proofreading
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