Question

求大神帮忙看下这几个英语句子错在了哪里?

1) running into the room , a chair caught his foot and he fell 这句应该是逻辑主语错了 ， 后面改成he fell because a chair caught his foot对吗？

2) walking alone in the desert , the traveller is boring

3) the men discussing at the meeting are not very popular

Answer 1

1.这个句子我会将句首的现在分词短语改成独立主格，he running into the room, 后面不变。之所以这么改是为了保持句子的节奏感和后半句的画面感。你的改法在语法上没有问题，但破坏了句子的节奏感和画面感。
2.将boring 改为bored。当一个动词的现在分词和过去分词都可以用作形容词时，区别在于：描述对象为人时用过去分词形容词，描述对象为物时用现在分词形容词。譬如 :
The book is interesting.
I am interested in….
The movie is scaring.
I am scared.
3. 这句话里的discussing 改为being discussed。

Answer 2

第一个你是对的。第二个boring应改成bored.第三个discussing应改成addressing/presenting/present.

Answer 3

后面两句话应该这么改
2 把boring 改成bored
3 把discussing 改成 discussed