Question

英语高手请进。请教一个句子，看看语法对不对，然后帮忙翻译一下

请让我知道你是否需要自己先保护那些商标还是忽视他们，让他们继续注册！

此下不知道翻译的对不对，请高手帮忙修改：
Please let me know whether you need to protect those trademarks first by yourself or take no notice of them go ahead with the procedure?

Answer 1

Please let me know whether you need to protect those trademarks first by yourself, or ignore their registering sequentially?

let me know 句式是正确的。
or 前面放一个逗号，就是标准的 whether...or...句式了。
忽视他们继续注册，可以用一个句子说清楚，意思也比较连贯、有动感。

Answer 2

go要换成going 作为them 的伴随壮语。要不然逻辑混乱！
是不是还要我翻译一次阿？你已经翻译得很不错了！
如果你加上and的话，主语就是you了，但这里应该是them,the trademarks

Answer 3

我个人认为这样译比较合适，其他汉字不翻译的好。 Please tell me whether you need to protect those trademarks first by yourself or allow them to go ahead with the procedure.

Answer 4

Let me know if you need to own a trademark to protect those who neglect them or allow them to continue to register!

Answer 5

第一，or 前要加一个都好才行，句子太长了。

第二，翻译不一定要把所有的词都翻到，意思更重要。

我自己翻的，不知道对不对，是不是应该用更专业一些的词语，只是参考。

please let me know whether you want to hold/protect the patent of the trademarks, or just ignore their registering sequentially?

Answer 6

Please let me know whether you need to protect those trademarks first or, ignore those and let them continue with the registration.