英语改错,求帮忙
10处错误MyEnglishteacher,Gregory,whoisanAmerican.HewasborninOctober1961.Aftergraduatefro...
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My English teacher,Gregory,who is an American.He was born in October 1961.After graduate from a university in 1982,he went South Africa.Twenty years late,he came to China and become a teacher in our school.He loves China or Chinese students very much.He also has a great interests in education.He has a lot of ways to make his classes live and interesting.In the past eight years,he has put all his heart into my work.He is considered as an honest,humorous teacher,and he is respected and loved with the students in our school. 展开
My English teacher,Gregory,who is an American.He was born in October 1961.After graduate from a university in 1982,he went South Africa.Twenty years late,he came to China and become a teacher in our school.He loves China or Chinese students very much.He also has a great interests in education.He has a lot of ways to make his classes live and interesting.In the past eight years,he has put all his heart into my work.He is considered as an honest,humorous teacher,and he is respected and loved with the students in our school. 展开
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who去掉,graduate用过去式graduated,went后加to,late改为later,become用过去式became,or改为and,interests改为单数,live改为lively,my改为his,with改为by
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去掉who
graduate改成graduation
he went to South Africa went 加to
Twenty years later late改成later
become改成became
China or Chinese or改成and
He also has a great interests in interests改成interest
he has put all his heart into my work.
my改成his
humorous前加a
with the students with改成by
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My English teacher,Gregory,(错误1,who多余) is an American.He was born in October 1961.After (2.用graduateion 或不要After直接用Graduated) from (3.a多余) university in 1982,he went (
4.少个to) South Africa.Twenty years late, he came to China and became (5.应用
过去式) a teacher in our school.He loves China and (6.or不对) Chinese students very much.He also has (7.a.与后面的复数矛盾) great interests in education.He has a lot of ways to make his classes live and interesting.In the past eight years,he has put (8.all不合逻辑) his heart into his (9.my不对) work.He is considered as an honest,humorous teacher,and he is respected and loved by (10.with不对) the students in our school.
4.少个to) South Africa.Twenty years late, he came to China and became (5.应用
过去式) a teacher in our school.He loves China and (6.or不对) Chinese students very much.He also has (7.a.与后面的复数矛盾) great interests in education.He has a lot of ways to make his classes live and interesting.In the past eight years,he has put (8.all不合逻辑) his heart into his (9.my不对) work.He is considered as an honest,humorous teacher,and he is respected and loved by (10.with不对) the students in our school.
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who去掉,graduate用过去式graduated,went后加to,late改为later,become用过去式became,or改为and,interests改为单数,live改为lively,my改为his,with改为by
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老师教过,一模一样,我昨天的作业
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