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I will try to make some suggestions to response to the perplexitythat you asked me for advice concerning whether you should study history orcomputer science.
Two thoughts on these things are very important. For one thing,university life is a preparation for your career life. For another, choosing aprofession in your interests is very meaningful.
For history and computer science you mentioned, I consider that computerindustry not only has a pretty job prospects better than history industry, butthe vast computer talents are demanded by it in future. I would recommend, therefore,you can select computer science, meanwhile consider history as your hobby thatcan be used to enrich your leisure hours.
Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies

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I would love to make some suggestions concerning whether you should study history or computer science, which you asked me for advice.
Two thoughts on these things are very important. For one, university life is a preparation for your career life. The other has to do with choosing a profession of your interests.
For history and computer science you mentioned, I consider that the computer industry not only has job prospects better than history majors, but computer talents are highly demanded in future. I would recommend, therefore, that you select computer science with history as a minor for your own interests.
Never the less, I'd respect whatever you decide to do. Good luck with your studies.