Question

请位高手帮我翻译一下我的求职信(汉-----英)

高分哈~~~由于有难度，为了避免没人回答浪费分数，翻译的高手们请帮帮忙，必定追加高分

尊敬的领导：
您好！衷心的感谢您在百忙之中翻阅我的这份材料，并祝愿贵单位事业欣欣向荣，蒸蒸日上！
自从进入大学之后，高考后的轻松、获知被录取的喜悦随风而逝。从高中进入大学一切都很陌生，面对新的起点，我明白只能继续努力奋斗，迎接新的挑战。大学四年是我思想、知识结构及心理、生长成熟的四年。惠于理工大学浓厚的学习、创新氛围，熔融其中的我成为了一名复合型人才。时光飞逝，我将怀着我的理想，带着对实现人生价值的渴望离开我的母校，走上新的工作岗位。
能源学院的老师常给我们说：“你们的师兄给你们创造了很好的条件，给成都理工争了光，现在你们才有这么好的就业前景，不能给学校抹黑，你们要为你们的师弟们创造出更好的品牌。”。我一直以这句话时刻提醒自己：不能辜负了我的师兄们打造出来的金字招牌，不能给成都理工丢脸！
我以“严”字当头，在学习上勤奋严谨，对课堂知识不懂就问，勤于学习更善于思考，力求深刻理解。纪律上，我做到了严格律己，不迟到、不早退，保证了出勤率，在大学期间无任何纪律处分。在掌握了本专业知识的基础上，不忘拓展自己的知识面，对课外知识也有比较广泛的涉猎。
现在，我将以满腔的热情，准备再次面对人生中的另一个新的起点，投身到现实社会这个大熔炉中，虽然存在很多艰难困苦，但我坚信，大学生活给我的精神财富能够使我战胜它们。 我真诚的希望成为贵公司的一名员工，我定会以饱满的热情、积极的态度、坚韧的性格投身于工作当中，与同事精诚合作，为贵公司的发展尽自己最大的努力，也希望领导能给我一个施展自己才华的空间，我绝不辜负公司领导的期望！ （下附个人简历）
此致
敬礼

求职者：***

Answer 1

如果是给外企，这样写是有严重问题的。

‘我以“严”字当头，在学习上勤奋严谨，对课堂知识不懂就问，勤于学习更善于思考，力求深刻理解。纪律上，我做到了严格律己，不迟到、不早退，保证了出勤率，在大学期间无任何纪律处分。在掌握了本专业知识的基础上，不忘拓展自己的知识面，对课外知识也有比较广泛的涉猎‘

这些不是你作为学生应该做的吗？写进来反而不合适。Cover letter要注重你个人的资质，优势，为什么你不同于其他毕业生，你的work ethics，你为什么适合所申请职位的要求，除了符合招聘条件，你还可以带给公司什么bonus?公司老板是很实际的。建议你还是看一下English cover letter sample吧，中文简历中国人自然看的懂了，除非你应聘翻译一职 ;)，不好意思，太直接了...

Answer 2

Distinguished leadership:
Hello! Thank you for your sincere in his busy schedule, I read this material, and wish your organization the cause of prosperity and bright future!
Since entering the university, the college entrance examination after it easy, have been informed to take the joy gone with the wind. From high school to enter university are all familiar with the face of a new starting point, I understand that can only continue to work hard to meet new challenges. University is a four-year, I thought, structure and psychological knowledge, the growth of mature four years. Hui University of Technology in the thick of the study, an atmosphere of innovation, which I melt into a complex talent. Time flies, I will be with my ideals, with the realization of the value of life desire to leave my alma mater and embark on new jobs.
College of energy to our regular teacher, said: "Your brother to you to create a good condition, Chengdu Institute of Technology to the struggle of light and now you have such a good job prospects, not to discredit the school, you have to your junior They create a better brand. ". I have been saying this to remind ourselves: can not live up to my brother to build out Jinzizhaopai, Chengdu Institute of Technology not to lose face!
I have "strict" Blinded, diligent in learning rigorous classroom knowledge asked not understand, a more diligent in learning good at thinking, seek to understand the profound. Discipline, I did it strictly self-disciplined, do not be late, do not leave early, to guarantee the attendance in college without any disciplinary action. In the hands of this on the basis of expertise, did not forget to expand their knowledge of extra-curricular knowledge in broad range.
Now, I will be filled with enthusiasm, ready to face life again in another new starting point, the real world into the melting pot, although there are many difficulties and hardships, but I am sure that my college life to the spiritual wealth can I beat them. I sincerely hope to become an employee of your company, I will be with full enthusiasm, positive attitude and tenacious character engaged in work with my colleagues sincerely cooperate for the development of your company do its best efforts to bring hope Leading give me a room for their own talent, I do not live up to the leadership of the company's expectations! (Under the biographical notes attached)
Sincerely
Salute

Job-seekers: ***

Answer 3

Distinguished leadership:
Hello! Thank you for your sincere in his busy schedule, I read this material, and wish your organization the cause of prosperity and bright future! Since entering the university, the college entrance examination after it easy, have been informed to take the joy gone with the wind. From high school to enter university are all familiar with the face of a new starting point, I understand that can only continue to work hard to meet new challenges. University is a four-year, I thought, structure and psychological knowledge, the growth of mature four years.Hui University of Technology in the thick of the study, an atmosphere of innovation, which I melt into a complex talent. Time flies, I will be with my ideals, with the realization of the value of life desire to leave my alma mater and embark on new jobs.

College of energy to our regular teacher, said: "Your brother to you to create a good condition, Chengdu Institute of Technology to the struggle of light and now you have such a good job prospects, not to discredit the school, you have to your junior They create a better brand. ". I have been saying this to remind ourselves: can not live up to my brother to build out Jinzizhaopai, Chengdu Institute of Technology not to lose face!

I have "strict" Blinded, diligent in learning rigorous classroom knowledge asked not understand, a more diligent in learning good at thinking, seek to understand the profound. Discipline, I did it strictly self-disciplined, do not be late, do not leave early, to guarantee the attendance in college without any disciplinary action. In the hands of this on the basis of expertise, did not forget to expand their knowledge of extra-curricular knowledge in broad range.

Now, I will be filled with enthusiasm, ready to face life again in another new starting point, the real world into the melting pot, although there are many difficulties and hardships, but I am sure that my college life to the spiritual wealth can I beat them. I sincerely hope to become an employee of your company, I will be with full enthusiasm, positive attitude and tenacious character engaged in work with my colleagues sincerely cooperate for the development of your company do its best efforts to bring hope Leading give me a room for their own talent, I do not live up to the leadership of the company's expectations! (Under the biographical notes attached) Sincerely