Question

请帮我看看这篇英语作文，有什么错误的请修改，尽量把句子改高级一点

Our parents provide us not only the life,but also much happiness and unforgettable experiences.They want us to grow up healthy and happy,so they may spoil and strict discipline to us.But they ignore the feelings in ourselves.For example,I don't like go for a walk after dinner,in this time,my father will request me have to go,so we have often for a number of small things.In fact,it is the small things that we will quarrel.And how to keep relationship good?It usually tells us more communicate with them.However,we should put ourselves in their else's shoes.Try to understand them and to make them happy.Let them know why you will do something they can't understand.At last,our parents are the most important in this world,we should tolerate them for the mistakes,because they offer me the opportunity to see this wonderful world.

Answer 1

Our parents not only give us a life, but also our happiness and unforgettable experience. They wish us to have a healthy and happy life(or, to grow up healthly and happily), ....

spoil us--这是溺爱孩子的意思……

They may have expectations to us that is so high that we may not feel good about the them which is upon us.

Moreother, in order to answer the ultimate question - how to maintain a good interactions with our parents...

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请问第三句加在哪里？

Answer 2

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