Question

急求！急求一段英语翻译

英语高手请帮忙翻译下面一段文字。谢谢！

要专业一点的、书面化的。

安全是宾客对饭店产品的第一需求，也是饭店获得市场的重要基础。本文在介绍饭店安全管理概况的基础上，对饭店安全管理的系统设置，饭店火灾及意外事件的预防与处理还有新形势下的饭店安全管理工作进行一个分析。

Answer 1

楼主，这样翻译处理最好了，可以达到你所要求的formalized与professional的标准。
（本人为广东外语外贸大学高级翻译学院一年级研究生，在“百度知道”专门选择帮人翻译的，请放心，绝不是机译或乱译。请楼主仔细体会n_n）

Security is the prime requirement of the guests for hotel products,and
it serves as the important factor through which the hotel gains market shares. In this article, we first presented the general conditions of aspects of hotel security management, on the basis of which it made further analysis on the system configuration of hotel security management, the prevention and solutions to emergencies like hotel conflagration and the details of hotel security management work in the new period.

楼主学酒店管理专业？？我这个译文通篇使用的词语应该说（不是自夸），都是完全符合酒店术语的，而且在句法上偏重灵活，适当采用增译法，令译文更流畅易读了些。
谢谢~！

Answer 2

The safety of hotel guests is the first product demand, the hotel is also an important foundation for market access. This article introduced in the restaurant's overview of safety management on the basis of the hotel's safety management system settings, the hotel fire and accident prevention have to deal with the new situation, the hotel management to carry out a safety analysis.

Answer 3

the safty is the first demand for the hotel products for guests , and it is also the important foundation that the hotel obtains the market . This assey is on the basis of safety management overview of introduction hotel,analying the set up the system to the safety management of the hotel , the preventing from of the fire of the hotel and how to deal with it,as well as the safe management of hotel under the new situation .

Answer 4

Security is the first requirement of the service in hotel, and the imporant foundation to win the markect.On the basis of introducing the general situation of hotel security management,this article makes an analysis of the settings of hotel security system, the prevention and solution of hotel emergency as well as the hotel security management in new situation.

本人为大三学生，祝好运

Answer 5

Security is the principle demand of the customers for the restaurant products.It is also the most important base for the restaurant to achieve the market.On the basic of introduing the profile of the restaurant security management,this article will make an analysis about the safe management system,the defending and dealing with for the fire and accidents as well as the new state which reataurant security system is facing.

Answer 6

本身这个文就不太顺。 ”安全。。。也是饭店获得市场的重要基础” 应该是 安全的声誉是饭店获得市场的重要基础。。。， 还有“本文在介绍饭店安全管理概况的基础上， 对饭店安全。。。进行一个分析”，动作不明？！是介绍基础的同时还是后。感觉有点虚，所以·我就自己改了一下成美国人可以理解的文法：

Safety is the number requirement for any hotel guest. The reputation of safety is also a fundamental factor in getting business. This article will discuss and analyze the trend in hotel risk management, hotel risk management system, fire and accident prevention and response planning, as well new models in risk management work.

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安全管理 在欧美商业理解是 “risk management” 或 风险管理。