Question

这句英文有语法错误吗？

Although English is my second language,I still have many obstacles to overcome,I hope I could overcame the language barrier in the near future.
我要表达的是“虽然英语是第二语言，我从小就学，但是还是不太好”这个意思……
是不是该在Although English is my second language,后加一句"I studied English Since I was a pupil"?

第二语言是第一外语啊……不是第二外语……

Answer 1

1，第一句没错的 ，但是需要改改，你写的有些生硬～

The learner of a second language have many obstacle to overcome.
第二语言学习者有许多障碍要克服。

2，could后面应该是动词原形～～ 应该是overcome～

比较标准的说法就是～～～～～～～
the learner of a second language have many obstacle to overcome ,and i am no exception.i just hope i could overcome the language barrier in the near future.
第二语言学习者有许多障碍要克服，而我也不例外。我就是希望自己能在不久的将来克服这些语言障碍～～

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虽然英语是第二语言，我从小就学，但是还是不太好”这个意思……
是不是该在Although English is my second language,后加一句"I studied English Since I was a pupil"?

先说一下 ，这句话中文就有问题～
什么叫“虽然英语是第二语言，我从小就学，但是还是不太好”
应该是”虽然我从小就学二外(英语），但还是学的不好“吧！！！
那么就是i touched english when i was a pupil～

Answer 2

1.首先前后因果关系不成立啊 尽管英语是我的第二外语，我仍然有许多障碍去克服
应该是因为英语是我的第二外语，所以我仍然有许多障碍克服
2.第二句 could是情态动词 后面动词用原形 所以overcame改为 overcome
最终：Because English is my second language,so I still have many obstacles to overcome.I hope I could overcome the language barrier in the near future.

Answer 3

1. 根据整句话的含义, 使用although不太合适. although表示让步从句, 表"尽管"的意思. 用 as 或者 since 更好些, 说明:因为是second language,所以有很多的困难.

2. overcame 错了, 应该是 overcome

3. overcome, obstacles 及 barrier 用的过多, 意思有些重复了, 显得累赘.

建议改成:

As English is my second laguage, I have many obstacles to overcome. But I still hope I could improve it greatly in the near future.

Answer 4

这样修改你看如何：

Since English is my second language, I have many obstacles to overcome/ I have encountered many obstacles/difficulties. I wish I could overcome the language barrier in the near future.

英语是第二语言 和 我遇到很多困难 应该是因果关系
而不是“虽然，但是”的关系吧
我不知道我的理解有没有错，希望对你有一点点帮助。

虽然英语是第二语言，我从小就学，但是还是不太好。

English is my second language. Therefore, although I started the learning progress at my young age, I still have not fully commanded it.

Answer 5

OVERCOME后面应该是句号。这是个完整的句子，没有连词连接下一个句子，所以需要断句。
但是从整个句子的逻辑来看，你的简要意思是“虽然英文是第二语言，但是我会克服”，所以如果在此处断句就变成“虽然英文是第二语言，但是我有很多障碍要克服”，逻辑上不通。所以，标调符号不要改，只要在“I still”前面加上一个AND，这样就通顺了。
COULD是情态动词，后面的动词要用原型OVERCOME。

Answer 6

"I hope I could overcame the language barrier in the near future."中的OVERCAME 改成OVERCOME.