Question

请英语高手帮忙翻译一下，我翻译的太没意境了

我想你，但只是想你而不打扰你

静静地想你，放上一段优雅的音乐，

你的身影很模糊，你的脸庞很朦胧，

但这并不影响我想你的情绪。

我没有很想你，

只是在高兴的时候会想起你，

你是我第一个想要分享的人；

我没有很想你，

只是在不高兴的时候会想起你，

你是我第一个想要倾诉的人。

我想你，但只是想你而不打扰你

我没有很想你，

只是在听歌的时候会突然想起你，

不为什么，

只因为那歌词里写的好像我和你；

我没有很想你，

只是在早晨醒来的时候会突然想起你，

不为什么，

只因为梦里出现的人好像你；

我没有很想你，

只是在看书的时候会突然想起你，

不为什么，

只因为那书中的男女主角好像我和你。

我真的没有很想你，

我只是在我不想想你的时候想起你。

这样真好，

我没有很想你，

我只是想你到眼睛湿润

我想你，但只是想你而不打扰你。

想你，但却害怕让你知道，所以不敢也不会打扰你。

只有把你的信息藏在手机里，

想你的时候把它们翻出来慢慢地看，细细地品，

然后就不停地在偷笑,悲伤。

过去,在每个寂静如水的夜晚等你的信息，

等来了，心里是一阵莫名的欢喜

等不来，就只有带着一丝淡淡的惆怅在半梦半醒中睡去。

想你，但却害怕让你知道，所以不敢也不会打扰你!

在没有你消息的日子里，

只有拼命地找寻你的点滴，

我没有很想你，

很想你....

Answer 1

　　(个人翻译，意境请你慢慢品尝)
　　我想你，但只是想你而不打扰你
　　I miss you,just thinking of you in my world

　　静静地想你，放上一段优雅的音乐，
　　thinking of you in gentle music world

　　你的身影很模糊，你的脸庞很朦胧，
　　your misty look，your misty face

　　但这并不影响我想你的情绪。
　　I miss you day and night.(直译缺乏美感)

　　我没有很想你，
　　I miss you(英文否定义很难表达，中文所具有的语言特色是英语比不过的，所以就这样翻译，或许那么多句的I miss you也能起到打动人心的效果。)

　　只是在高兴的时候会想起你，
　　Just when I am happy

　　你是我第一个想要分享的人；
　　you're the one I wanna go share

　　我没有很想你，
　　I miss you

　　只是在不高兴的时候会想起你，
　　Just when I am sad

　　你是我第一个想要倾诉的人。
　　you're the one I wanna confide

　　我想你，但只是想你而不打扰你
　　I miss you,just thinking of you in my world

　　我没有很想你，
　　I miss you

　　只是在听歌的时候会突然想起你，
　　just when I'm lost in the music

　　不为什么，只因为那歌词里写的好像我和你；
　　the lyric remind me of the day you and me(意译的)

　　我没有很想你，
　　I miss you

　　只是在早晨醒来的时候会突然想起你，
　　just when I wake up in the morning baby

　　(不为什么，只因为梦里出现的人好像你； )建议删掉，译成英文不和谐，用这样的简单句很美，说多了显得有点矫饰。
　　the dream is beautiful with you

　　我没有很想你，
　　I miss you

　　只是在看书的时候会突然想起你，
　　just when I read the book.

　　不为什么， 只因为那书中的男女主角好像我和你。
　　the story remind me of the day you and me

　　我真的没有很想你，
　　I miss you

　　我只是在我不想想你的时候想起你。
　　just when I don't wanna think of you

　　这样真好，
　　baby

　　我没有很想你，
　　I miss you.

　　我只是想你到眼睛湿润
　　I just think of you with tears in my eyes

　　我想你，但只是想你而不打扰你。
　　I miss you,just thinking of you in my world

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　　翻译到此，接下去的翻译用中文更好吧，因为英语确实难以表现。
　　我已经体会到你的感情了。
　　给你介绍首歌

　　曲名：you were my everything 歌手：Aviation

　　歌词很感人，以前和女朋友闹矛盾冷战的时候就听这首歌，是唯一听不厌的歌。

Answer 2

一个建议：写诗 句子结构相同 的最好别超过3个，不然，别人看的很乏味！！！

Answer 3

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