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Eric’mother bought a toy car for Eric as a Christmas gift.This day,Eric played the car with Lily at his home.They sat on the sofa.Lily looked at the small green car.The toy car looked very cool.Eric made his car run very fast.He is very happy.Lily also want to play.She said to Eric in a low voice"Could you please allow me to play the small car for some time?"Eric said"No, I don't want to do that! It's mine,isn't yours.You will destroy it.""I swear I will not do that.....Only 10 minutes,OK?"Lily asked him again, but he did't agree.Lily was very sad.Eric took away the remote control.This time,Eric'mother was coming.She looked at the sad girl,"What happend to you?Dear?""I want to play the car with Eric......"Eric'mother heard about this ,said"Eric, Playing together is moer happy.Don't be Selfish,OK?"Eric's face was red,he gave the remote control to Lily.Lily smilesd.They spent a happy day!
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Answer 1

Eric’s mother bought a toy car for Eric as a Christmas gift.One day,Eric was playing the car with Lily at home.They were sitting on the sofa.Lily looked at the small green car.The toy car looked very cool.Eric made his car running very fast.He was very happy.Lily also wanted to play.She said to Eric in a low voice"Could you please lend me play the small car for a moment?"Eric said:"No, I don't want to give you! It's mine,isn't yours.You will destroy it.""I swear I will not .....Only 10 minutes,OK?"Lily asked him again, but he did't agree.Lily was very sad.Eric took away the remote control.This time,Eric'mother was coming.She looked at the sad girl and asked,"What happend to you,Dear?""I want to play the car with Eric......"Eric'mother heard about this ,said"Eric, Playing with other children is more happy.Don't be Selfish,OK?"Eric's face was red,he gave the remote control to Lily.Lily smiled.They spent a happy day!

Answer 2

Eric'mother买了玩具车的埃里克作为圣诞gift.This一天，埃里克发挥了一辆车在他的百合home.They坐在sofa.Lily望着小绿car.The玩具车看起来非常cool.Eric发他的汽车运行非常fast.He是非常happy.Lily也想play.She说，埃里克低声“你能不能请允许我发挥小型车一段时间？ ”埃里克说： “不，我不要做到这一点！这是地雷，是不是yours.You将摧毁它。 “ ”我发誓，我不会做.....只有10分钟，好吗？ “莉莉再次问他，但他同意did't 。百合是非常sad.Eric拿走了远程control.This时间， Eric'mother是coming.She望着伤心的女孩， “什么happend吗？亲爱的？ ” “我想打车与Eric ... ... “ Eric'mother听说过这一点，说： ”埃里克，在一起打球是moer happy.Don ' T是自私的，好吗？ “埃里克的脸是红色的，他给远程控制Lily.Lily smilesd.They度过了快乐白天