Question

英语短文改错，帮忙看看，很急！！谢谢

In wednesday morning , when I was walking down the Main Street , I heard form two shots. I thought that they were from the bank , so I ran towards it.I saw that a man which was short and fat is running out. More importantly,he had a bag and a gun in his hands. After I could do anything, he disappeared behind bus. That afyernoon I went to the movies. I almost couldn't help scream when I saw the thief there again! I called the police secret. The police arrived in less than five minute and arrested the thief just when he was buying a chocolate bar from a candy machine. What an unusually day!

Answer 1

In改为On 去掉heard后面的from which改成who is改成was after改成before scream改成screaming secret改成secretly minute改成minutes usually改成unsual
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