Question

英语短文改错，快啊！！！急死了！！

Twelve-year-old Taylor Bernard,who was born with a serious disease,has trouble control the muscles in her body.Her twin 1.____ sister Sydney likes sports,when Taylor has a different interest: art. 2.____ Taylor delivered a watercolor painting to an art contest.With the 3.____ more than 5,500 students who had applied,only 51 selected.Taylor was 4.____ one of them. Her painting is now at show in Union Station, 5____ in Washington, DC.
Taylor and her family had traveled to Washington,DC to attend 6.____ a ribbon-cutting ceremony for the exhibition,calling "State of the 7.____ Art" and to celebrate the accomplishments. 每句话后面的横线处改错，最好能写出是为什么错了。

Answer 1

1. control → controlling
固定句型：sb have trouble (in) doing sth 某人做某事有麻烦/困难

2. when → while或but
句意为转折/对比

3. With → Among
句意为“在申请的5500多个学生中，只有51人被选中”。

4. 在selected前面加上were
该句为被动语态，所以是“be动词were + 过去分词selected”

5. at → on
固定短语：on show，意思是“在展览中”

6. 去掉had
句子时态只需用一般过去时，而无需使用过去完成时（没有另外一个过去动作/时间的对比以表示“过去的过去”）

7. calling → called
句意为“被称为...”，即the exhibition和call之间为被动关系

8. 楼主没有打完第八句，不好判断错误。