Question

再请教高手雅思作文一题

10号就考试。高手帮忙，下面的题目主要不知从何下手。写出结构，论点，分论点就好，中英文亦可。给满意答案定加重谢~~！
More working people are busy with work and have no enough time to spend with their family and friends. Why does this happen? What are the effects on family life and society as a whole?
as a whole是整体来写对家庭和社会影响还是分开写？段落很重要。请明示。

Answer 1

(能力有限，没办法只能回答这么点了)
as whole是来写这种现象对社会影响。
SO THIS IS OUR LIFE
More working people are busy with work and have no enough time to spend with their family and friends. Why does this happen?The answer is so this is our life.
Every morning wake up as early as possible ,washing,haveing breakfast,waiting bus....(此段主要论述整天忙忙碌碌是为了赚钱生存)
Family,in you eyes as a bus stop 。A man for money will just across.(论述家庭对上班族的意义和当想起朋友的时候是在他们需要的时候)
最后论述社会正出于亚健康状态，
OK没时间些啦

Answer 2

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