Question

现代汉语翻译成英语，高手能帮个忙吗？

请教一段信件翻译，中文翻译英文

感谢您在百忙之中查看我的邮件，..........，我的中国导师告诉过我，现今流行艺术源自西方启蒙运动与文艺复兴时候的思想创新和艺术积淀，去西方学习传媒之道及艺术之法，可以极大开阔眼界增长见识，最重要的是能学习到中国传统文化之外的艺术见地和思想，从而反哺中国文艺。中国古语有云：观千剑而后识器，操千曲而后晓声，我想只有学贯中西艺术的精髓才能够传承发扬艺术的魅力并在此基础上开拓创新，我想任何一所如贵校这样具有国际化视野与影响力的注重观念碰撞与融合的走在世界前端的创意媒体学院都不会拒绝一位具有此理想和信念的虔诚的中国学生的申请。所以，我非常非常希望能进入贵校创意媒体专业进行深造。这是我的一个梦想，也是我长期以来努力的方向。
悬赏分数已经修改，希望高手继续翻译，我分数就这么一点全部悬赏了哦。一些翻译让我看见了一些希望。谢谢先！ smash88的翻译很不错，谢谢你！期待看那个匿名人士翻完。我又追加分数了。

谢谢匿名的提醒，这个是一封公关信件，套套近乎的。很多的材料我已经有PPT和PDF以及视频音频发给老外了，那些材料已经作为我申请的依据了，但是因为老外工作效率太慢，回复得太慢，所以就想发封邮件去催一下，让他别磨叽。 这个邮件的内容，就是想再次提醒一下老外，我喜欢他们的学院，请快点看我的材料，并迅速考虑一下之前我的邮件内容。
但是匿名朋友的建议听起来很不错，我想看看按照你理解的意境翻译是怎么样的效果，你可以按照你推崇的结构去翻译。其实我也是求一个意境，因为我也只会直译，不会异议。那些诗歌更是不知道怎么去找英文韵脚和比喻，所以中文的“意近旨远”的气质翻译不出来，还望高手指点。

我要选两个最佳答案，每个人至少100分以上吧，通过其他方式给积分。 我会再开个帖子贴个简单问题，然后请最佳答案的两个朋友进去踩一下。我这个帖子积分到顶了，但没有办法追加积分，但是我会通过别的方式补偿。

Answer 1

Xie your busy schedule to read my mail ,.........., my Chinese tutor told me that today's popular art from the Western Enlightenment and the Renaissance when the idea of innovation and artistic heritage, Western media to learn of the Road and art law, can greatly broaden their horizons to see growth in the most important thing is to learn traditional Chinese culture to the outside of the art of insight and ideas, thereby feeding the Chinese literature and art. China is an old saying: View of thousands of knowledge and then the sword, and Cao Xiao-1000 and then the sound, I think only the study of the essence of both Chinese and Western art will be able to carry forward the tradition of the charm of art on the basis of innovation, I would like to any one if your school such an international field of vision and influence of the emphasis on the concept of the collision and integration in the world, the front of the School of Creative Media will not refuse a man of ideals and beliefs in this devout Chinese students to apply. Therefore, I am very very much hope to get into the school of creative media professionals to carry out further studies. This is my dream, but also my long-standing efforts.

Answer 2

In spite of being very busy thanks you to examine my mail, .........., my Chinese teacher has told me, nowadays the pop art comes from time the West Enlightenment and the Renaissance thought innovation and art of accumulates, goes to law of road and the artistic the Western study media, may broaden one's outlook enormously the growth experience, most importantly can study outside China traditional culture the artistic insight and the thought that thus returns nurturing to parents the Chinese literary arts. The Chinese archaism has the cloud: The view thousand swords then know, holds thousand tunes then to understand the sound, I think only then the knowledgeable of East and West artistic essence only then to be able to inherit carry forward the artistic charm and based on this develop the innovation, I thought that any like your school will have the internationalization field of vision and the influence like this pays great attention the idea collision and fusion walking will refuse one front end the world creativity media institute to have this ideal and the faith reverent Chinese student's application. Therefore, I very hoped that can enter your school creativity media specialized to carry on pursues advanced studies. This is my dream, is also I since long the direction diligently.

Answer 3

难哦 虽然外语专业 但照你这中国逻辑 就算死译出来 恐怕老外看不懂

Answer 4

Thank you in spite of being very busy toglance check my E-mail,..., my Chinese teacher told me that today popular art originates from the western enlightenment and Renaissance of innovative thinking and artistic when western learning, to the media and art, can greatly increase knowledge, broaden their vision, the most important is to learn Chinese traditional culture from art insightful and Chinese literary thoughts, and feedback. China is in the clouds: the sword and general view, thousands of thousands of music and sound ones, I think only knows the essence of art of Chinese tradition to develop artistic charm and on the basis of innovation, I think that if any one of the influence and internationalized vision is to collide with the concept of integration in front of the school of creative media world won't refuse a has the ideal and faith of the Chinese students apply for piety. So, I very want to enter your school of creative media professionals for further study. This is one of my dream, I also long direction.

Answer 5

Thank you very much for reading my email in your busy schedule. My professor in China once told me that modern art originated from the innovation during Renaissance in the West. Studying media communication in the West will help open my eyes and mind, and more importantly, it will give me the opportunity to absorb the art and ideas outside of traditional Chinese culture, which in turn will benefit improving Chinese art when I return.

你的中文写得很好，但是我觉得中文的思维方式不被老外接受。比如说，中文是先叙述原因，后给结论；英文是先下结论，后说原因。另外，中国人的思维方式是只论述为什么申请人迫切希望加入所申请的学校，而老外却会论述为什么所申请的学校应该在所有申请人中选择你。如果你同意我的观点的话，我将会把你的文章结构改成老外喜欢的方式，不然我就像原来一样翻译你的文章。请告诉我你喜欢哪种方式。