Question

请帮我看看这首诗有没有什么语法问题，谢谢了

Thank you, My friends

I want to thank all of my friends,
Especially Lucy,
Who was there every time I needed her.

I want to thank all of my friends,
Especially Angela,
Who was there every time I needed her.

I want to thank all of my friends,
Especially Ann,
Who was there every time I needed her.

I want to thank all of my friends,
Especially my three sisters: Lucy, Angela and Ann,
We are ALWAYS being friend forever……

I thank all of my friends,
Like Amy, Finny, Sandy, Wendy……even Richardson,
I thank you a lot,
I’ve be never forget you forever.

这就是某人写的。。。我知道很烂。。。而且是第一次。。。肯定有问题。。。但是我要发给我的同学们
有些是人名来的。。。
希望各位高手能给我指点一下。。。谢谢了！！！！！！！！！

Answer 1

最后一句为什么用完成时？
是不是应该用将来时啊？
是要表达“我永远不会忘记你们”的意思吗？
I'll never forget you.
倒数第二段的forever如果不写或许会好一些
或者“We are friends FOEVER.”

Answer 2

VERY GOOD!

Answer 3

几乎没有什么问题吧，不过感觉有点空，不咋顺眼