Question

英语翻译，在线等

各位亲爱的来宾，欢迎光临XX店。今日卖场人潮较多，请保管好自己的随身物品，照看好您的小孩。XX店祝您购物愉快。
店里的日常广播，但是我用爱词霸翻译为“Today, more people, please protect your belongings, to guard against loss”感觉象‘中国英语’，主要是广播给外国人听，人家听到不是要贻笑大方？
麻烦英语高手翻译下，在线等。谢谢。
很谢谢大家的解答。我希望有朋友能给我分析以下几个问题。
1开头，Ladies and Gentelmen和customers、guests在广播里都是可以用的么？
2保管，protect和take care of两个词谁更适合并准确一些？
3希望有经常听英语广播的朋友给我提几个好的建议或者广播当中应该注意的。
为了不浪费彼此的时间，今天下午3点前我会给出满意答案。
非常感谢各位的热心解答。

Answer 1

Dear Ladies and Gentlemen,welcome to XX.Today there are more people in the mall,please take care of your personal effects and your chilren.Wish you a good shopping day.

Answer 2

Dear customers,welcome to our XX Shop.
For we've got more people here in the mall, so please take care with your personal belongings and your children.
We wish you a happy shopping here,thank you.

Answer 3

Dear guests, Welcome to shop XX. Today, more people shopping, please protect your belongings, as optimistic about your child. XX shop I wish you a happy shopping.
这样应该可以把

Answer 4

这只是一个版本:
Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to ...
Today ,as you can see,the mall is extremly crowded.So please take care of your own belongings and your kids!Enjoy your shopping here!Thank you for your support and cooperation!

Answer 5

Ladies and Gentlemen,
Welcome to XX.Today there are more people in the mall,please take care of your personal things and your children.May you have a good shopping day.
Thank you for coming!