求英语好的大神帮我看看这段英语有错误吗？求指出错误谢谢啦。 10
错误：句子太长，没有断句；专有名词没有大写；用词不好。
修正如下：
The major of Digital Media and Society sets its foundation on understanding and learning of digital media and its impact on the social, political, economic, and cultural environment. It provides solutions to the concerns in popular fields, including utilizing public media, large datasets, sharing economy, and digital copyright protection.
英语发音技巧： “R”不发音
要知道，大多数说英音的人发R音的时候都不卷舌（除了那些来自苏格兰、诺森比亚、北爱尔兰和兰开夏郡部分地区的人），但并非所有英式口音都相同。元音之后的R不要发音，同时拉长元音，还可以加上一个“uh”音（here就读成“heeuh”）。在像“hurry”这样的单词中，不要把R和元音混在一起，要读成“huh－ree”。
错误不少：
句子太长，没有断句
专有名词没有大写
用词不好
The major of Digital Media and Society sets its foundation on understanding and learning of digital media and its impact on the social, political, economic, and cultural environment. It provides solutions to the concerns in popular fields, including utilizing public media, large datasets, sharing economy, and digital copyright protection.
专有名词没有大写
用词不好
The major of Digital Media and Society sets its foundation on understanding and learning of digital media and its impact on the social, political, economic, and cultural environment. It provides solutions to the concerns in popular fields, including utilizing public media, large datasets, sharing economy, and digital copyright protection.
