Question

帮忙翻译一段简单的文字哦。拒绝翻译软件。谢谢。可以加分哦。

我于08年7月份毕业 专业是管理 但事实上成绩并不理想 不过我一直很喜欢这个专业 所以很乐意并且很荣幸能来这里应聘与它相关的工作 如果有幸能受聘 我将全力以赴完成工作任务 对于工作经验而言 我只做过销售员的兼职 所以现在更坦诚的来到这里 全心全意希望能得到这个工作
。。。。。。很急。。。

Answer 1

I gratuated in management in July,2008. Although the grade was not as good as expected, I have been interested in this major and would like to apply related jobs. If luckily I beome your employee, I will finish my work at greatest effort. As for work experience, I did sale in my part time. With the greatest sincereness, I hope I can get the job and contribute to your company.

抱歉没有逐词翻译。 若是作为外企的应聘材料，我个人认为你的原文在很多地方还需要改进。例如， “如果有幸能受聘 我将全力以赴完成工作任务”。我想，完成岗位工作是最基本的要求吧，这并不是公司聘用你的期望。

我翻译的过程中感到你使用的是I- attitude, not You-attitude, which is basic for applying a job.

应聘的时候，像这种商业文涵，最好简明扼要，忌长篇大论，而没有point。

Answer 2

I graduated from the university in July ,2008.I am major in management, but my academic achievement is not satisfactory. However ,I take a fency to my major and I am so glad as well as honored to be here to apply this job.
If I am fortuned enough to be applied,I will put all my efforts into completing my tasks.
As for working experience,I have only done the job as a salesperson, so I come here more frankly and I hope I can get this job whole-heartedly.

祝你成功！

Answer 3

I graduated with my degree of management in July, 2008. Although my score is not as good as I expected, I really enjoy my major and am looking forward to a job related. If I'm lucky enough to work with you,I'll try my best. As for working experience, frankly speaking, I just worked as a part-time salesperson before. Do hope I can work together with you.

Answer 4

I graduate the specialty at 2008 in July am the management in fact result am not but ideal I very much to like this specialty, therefore is glad very much, and is honored very much can come here to respond to a call for recruits the work which is related with it, if fortunately can be hired I whole-heartedly to complete the work mission speaking of the work experience me only to make seller's concurrent job, therefore the present more honest arrives at here to hope wholeheartedly can obtain this to work

Answer 5

I was graduated on July,2008, and I major in management. To be honest, I wasn't did well during my college course, but I like this major best all the time. Therefore, it's my pleasure and honest to be here for the job interview. If I could be the lucky one, I'll try my best to accomplish my job mission. For the job experiences, I just be part-time seller before. I do want this job seriously.