Question

帮忙解决这道英语改错题，有十个错误，不是每行一个，是十个含在文章里面的，英语高手麻烦你们了，谢谢！

I appreciate your help very well. On the first day of camp,you came up to myself while I was sitting alone.After that,you always gave me specially attention and inspire me to john in activities.With a result,I gradually got to know the other camper.Because of the help you gave me in that summer,my life changed.I gained so much confidence that I went back to school as the new person.My grades improved.I became very active but made new friends.Today,I got a letter that said I had admitted to a college.I am proud of it.I just want to thank you for helping me baconing a different person.

Answer 1

I appreciate your help very( well)<1>. On the first day of camp,you came up to (myself)<2> while I was sitting alone.After that,you always gave me (specially )<3>attention and inspire me to john in activities.(With)<4> a result,I gradually got to know the other (camper)<5>.Because of the help you gave me in that summer,my life changed.I gained so much confidence that I went back to school (as)<6> (the )<7>new person.My grades improved.I became very active (but)<8> made new friends.Today,I got a letter that said I (had)<9> admitted to a college.I am proud of it.I just want to thank you for helping me (baconing)<10> a different person.
纠正：
1.much
2.mine
3.special
4.As
5.campers
6.like
7.a
8.and
9.had been
10.become

Answer 2

第一句，把well 改成 much.I appreciate your help very much.
第二句，把myself改成me:you came up to me 你向我走来、你走向我
come up (to sb):to move towards sb,in order to talk to them为 攀谈而走到跟前，走近
这里myself是反身代词，只有前面主语是“我”，后面 才可能用myself(我自己)
第三句，把specially 改成 special
修饰attention 这个名词的应为形容词而非副词
本句第二个错误，把inspire 改成inspired
这里应用过去时态，与and 之前的动词时态一样
第四句，把with 改为 as
as a result 作为……的结果，
本句第二个错误，把the other camper 改为 other campers
在一个camp 中不可能只有两个人
第五句，把 changed 改为 have changed
此处讲过去的事情对现在的影响和结果，应该用完成时态
第六句，把 as the new person 改为 as a new person
第八句，把 but 改为 and .
两个句子是顺承而非转折关系
第九句，把i had admitted to 改为i had been admitted to
我是“被”录取，应为被动语态。。

这是我找的错误，有不准确的请高手指正啊