Question

请英语高手帮忙把其中的错误改一下！多谢多谢！

China is well-known for its scenery. It is grand views, mountains, moors, lochs and hills have earned China the reputation of being one of the most beautiful places on the planet! A 30 minute drive through some parts of China can see the scenery literally change before your eyes, from sparse, heather covered hills, to flowing, pine-tree flanked rivers. China is famous for its history and here you will find photos of some of the finest historical sites in China, as well as some that you may not have heard of before. Photographs from some of the many beautiful towns and villages around China, all of which have their own unique character and charm. No two places are ever the same here and each place has that "little something" that sets it apart from anywhere you've been before!

Answer 1

China is well-known for its scenery. It is grand views, mountains, moors, lochs and hills （强调句型：it is 。。that。。这里的that不能省略） have earned China the reputation （应改为：for one of the。。） of being one of the most beautiful places on the planet!
A 30 minute（30-minute 或 30 minutes'表示“30分钟的”） drive through some parts of China can (help you 用第二人称较亲切)see the scenery literally change（表示进行中的用changing好一些） before（in front of you） your eyes,（后解释说明逗号改为冒号或破折号） from sparse, heather covered hills, to flowing, pine-tree flanked rivers.
China is famous for its history and here you will find photos of some of the finest historical sites in China, as well as some that you may not have heard of before. Photographs（少谓语动词，加个are） from some of the many（most？） beautiful towns and villages around China, all of which have their own unique character and charm. No two places are ever the same here and each place has that "little something" that sets it apart from anywhere you've been before!

Answer 2

China is well-known for its scenery. Grand views, mountains, moors, lochs and hills have earned China the reputation of being one of the most beautiful places on the planet. A 30-minute drive through some parts of China can let you see the scenery's literal change in front of your eyes, from sparse, heather covered hills, to flowing, pine-tree flanked rivers. China is famous for(重复） its history and you can take photos in some of the finest historical sites in China, as well as some that you may not have heard of before. Photographs from some of the many beautiful towns and villages around China, all of which have their own unique characteristics. Two places are never the same here and each place has that "little something" that sets it apart from anywhere you've been before!

Answer 3

China is well-known for its scenery. (第二句话有问题)It is grand views, mountains, moors, lochs and hills have earned China the reputation of being one of the most beautiful places on the planet! A 30 minute drive through some parts of China can (make me)see the scenery literally change (没有这种说法before your eyes), from sparse, heather covered hills, to flowing, pine-tree flanked rivers. China is famous for its history and （here前后重复） you （can take）photos of some of the finest historical sites in China, as well as some that you（ may not删除） have heard of before. Photographs （from改为of） some of the （删去many ）beautiful towns and villages around China, （从句用得不对，没有谓语）all of which have their own unique character and charm. （No two places are ever the same here这是中国式英语，应为Scenes of different places are quite different） and each place has (that "little something" 改为sth+adj的形式)that sets it apart from anywhere you've been before!
该文章内容多有重复，从句使用不恰当，有时间多练习，尽量用简单句不会错，多穿插固定短语。希望我有帮到你。