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急！！请高手帮我翻译一下要发到美国去！（不要在线翻译的，那个不行我需要通畅的，拜托各位了！！！）

尊敬的**，
我是江苏省扬州大学经济学院，国际经济与贸易系一年级学生**。我母亲***是美国友邦保险公司江苏分公司心悦营管处经理。之前，她就有关我申请奖学金一事曾两次向您发送过电子邮件。并且在近日也收到你们的回复：希望我亲自写信提出申请。
我于2008年6月参加全国高考，并考取江苏省重点大学，扬州大学。之前我母亲就多次向我提及奖学金一事，以此来鼓励我更加努力地学习。我也一直以能够申请到史戴奖学金为荣。我在大学里一直保有着良好的上进心，大学第一学期就通过了CET-4，并将在下以学期尽快通过CET-6。拥有着良好的活动能力和组织能力，多才多艺，并加入学校学生会文娱部，以此来锻炼自己。我所攻读的是国际商务专业，这次的金融风暴给予我了巨大启示，我真切希望自己在毕业后能为世界金融界献出自己的力量。
我们全家都对友邦公司的创始人史戴先生怀着深深的敬意并期待能够获得史戴奖学金（AIG)的支持与帮助。我父母都已在美国友邦保险公司工作多年，取得良好的业绩并深深热爱着这个职位，而我，将来亦会寻找机会在友邦公司实习，效力于保险事业。因此如果能申请到奖学金，对我将会是莫大的鼓舞与感动。
今天是3月8日，国际劳动妇女节，也是我的20岁生日。在我成人的这一刻，渴望能够获得你们饿支持，相信这必将成为我最珍贵的成人礼物。在今天再次向您提出书面申请，希望我们全家的良好愿望，能在太平洋的那一头，得以实现。

Answer 1

Dear **,
I am Yangzhou University, Jiangsu Province, School of Economics, International Economics and Trade Department of ** one-grade students. *** My mother is American International Assurance Company, Jiangsu Branch Moods business office manager. Prior to that, she on my application for scholarship has twice had to send you e-mail. And recently also received your response: I hope that I have personally written to apply.
Me in June 2008 to participate in the national college entrance examination and obtain a key university of Jiangsu Province, Yangzhou University. Before my mother mentioned to me on several occasions regarding scholarships in order to encourage me more to study. I also have to be able to apply to the history of scholarship proud to wear. I have been at the university Paul has a good ambition, the University adopted the first semester on the CET-4, and the next semester as soon as possible to the adoption of CET-6. Events have a good capacity and organizational capacity, versatile, and add the Department of Cultural School Student Union, in order to exercise their own. I study international business professional, by the financial turmoil has given me great inspiration, I sincerely hope that their own after graduation for the world financial community gave its own strength.
Our family of friendly co-founder Mr. Shi Dai is with deep respect and look forward to be able to access the history of wearing scholarships (AIG) support and assist. My parents have been at American International Assurance Company for many years, and achieved good performance and a deep love of the job and me, and will look for internship opportunities at our allies, the effect on insurance undertakings. So if we can apply to scholarships, to me would be greatly encouraged and impressed.
Today is March 8th, International Women's Day is also my 20th birthday. At this moment of my adult, eager to be able to get support for your hungry, I believe this will become my most precious gifts adult. At today once again to your application in writing, I hope our family's good wishes to those in the Pacific 1, can be achieved.

Answer 2

终于写完了, 虽然不曾相识,不过祝你成功! 顺利取得史戴奖学金,也祝你学业有成.

Dear**,
I’m a freshman who is from international economics and trade department of the faculty of economics of Yangzhou University in Jiangsu province
my name is***, my mother ***is a manager of Xinyue management and administration office of branch company in Jiangsu of American Insurance Association, before this time, my mother have sent e-mail related to my scholarship application twice to you and received your replies recently: you hope that I can write this letter in person to apply for scholarship.
I attended national college entrance examination in June 2008, and was later admitted to the key university in Jiangsu-Yanghzou University. Before this time, my mother mentioned the scholarship to me many times to encourage me to study hard. I take pride in obtaining Sarr scholarship all along. I kept enterprising spirit during university all along, I past CET-4 test at first semester, and I am planning to pass CET-6 as soon as possible at the next semester, I am versatile and possess a great ability of organizing activities, I joined the recreational board of student union to temper myself. I major in international trade, I gained enlightenment from this financial storm and really hope that I can contribute my share to the financial world of the world after my graduation, our family pay our respect to C.V. Starr -the originator of American Insurance Association and expect to get the support and help to obtain Starr scholarship, my parents have worked in American Insurance Association for many years, have a deep love for this job and obtained great achievements, as for me, I would also find an opportunity to get the great chance to do an internship in the future and dedicate myself to insurance cause, thus, it is the greatest inspiration and gratefulness for me to obtain the scholarship.
Today is March 8, 2009, International Working Women's Day, it is also my birthday. I am eager for your support at this moment of becoming an adult and believe that it would be the most precious gift of becoming an adult. Today, I send this written application once again and hope that our family’s wish can be realized in the place over the Pacific

Answer 3

Honorable * *, I am a Jiangsu province Yangzhou University economy academy , international economy and trade are one grade student * *. My mother * * * is that the heart of American International Assurance Co. Jiangsu branch company delights camp supervising the place manager. Prior to, she applies for scholarship right away in connection with me being related have dispatched once twice an email to you. And reply to in receiving you recently also: Hope that I write a letter in person suggesting that applying. I participate in the whole nation college entrance examination on June , 2008 , am admitted to and Jiangsu province key college , Yangzhou University. My mother mentions scholarship prior to right away many times to me being related , come to encourage me to make great efforts especially on this account the field studies. I take pride in being able to apply to arrive at Shidai scholarship also always. My at a college is always guaranteed having fine desire to advance, the first school terms of university have passed CET-4 right away , will have pass CET-6 as soon as possible I with the school term and. Be owning fine the ability using personal influence and organizational capability , be being gifted in many ways, join and the school student union entertainment headquarter , come to temper self on this account. What I assiduously study is international business affairs special field, current finance storm has given me the enormous enlightenment , my vivid hope can be that world financial circle dedicates self strength after self graduating. Our Mr. founder Shidai of whole family all to friendly country company is keeping in mind deeply the respect joins the support expecting to be able to gain Shidai scholarship (AIG)'s and help. My parents works all already in American International Assurance Co. many years, be getting fine achievement and be loving this position heartily deeply, but I, also am able to seek a chance in the future in friendly country company practice , render a service in insurance cause. Arrive at scholarship therefore if being able to apply , will may be greatest stimulating and move to me. Today is Women's Day working between nations on March 8, is also 20-year-old birthday of me. In my this moment of adult,long to be able to gain your hungry support , believe that this will certainly become my most costful adult gift. Before today apply once again in written form to your put forward, hope our fine desire of whole family , can manage to come true in that Pacific head.

Answer 4

** العزيز ،
أنا جامعة يانغتشو بمقاطعة جيانغسو ، كلية الاقتصاد ، والاقتصاد الدولي والتجارة في وزارة واحدة ** طلاب الصف. *** أمي هي شركة التأمين الدولية الامريكية وجيانغسو وفرع الأعمال المزاج مدير المكتب. وقبل ذلك ، على طلب للحصول على المنح الدراسية مرتين وكان لإرسال البريد الإلكتروني. وكما وردت مؤخرا ردكم : أرجو أن أكون قد كتبت إلى تطبيق شخصيا.
لي في يونيو 2008 للمشاركة فى امتحانات القبول الجامعى الوطنية والحصول على الجامعات الرئيسية فى مقاطعة جيانغسو ، يانجتشو جامعة. قبل والدتي ذكرت لي في مناسبات عدة عن المنح الدراسية من أجل تشجيع لي لمزيد من الدراسة. ولدي أيضا أن تكون قادرة على تطبيق لتاريخ منح الدراسية بالفخر لارتداء. لقد كنت في الجامعة بول جيدة الطموح ، وجامعة النصف الأول اعتمد على التعريفة الخارجية المشتركة - 4 ، والفصل الدراسي القادم في أقرب وقت ممكن لاتخاذ بتوقيت وسط أوروبا - 6. الأحداث جيدا قدرة والقدرة التنظيمية والمرونة ، وتضيف وزارة الثقافة ، اتحاد طلاب المدرسة ، وذلك من أجل أن تمارس وحدها. ادرس المهنية التجارية الدولية ، والاضطرابات المالية التي قدمها لي إلهام كبير ، وأرجو مخلصا أن بنفسها بعد التخرج بالنسبة للعالم والمجتمع المالي أعطى قوة خاصة بها.
أسرتنا الودية الشريك المؤسس السيد شي داى ببالغ الاحترام ، ونتطلع إلى أن يكون قادرا على الوصول إلى ارتداء تاريخ منح دراسية (أمريكان انترناشيونال جروب (دعم ومساعدة. والدي كان على شركة التأمين الدولية الامريكية لسنوات عديدة ، وحققت أداء جيدا ، والحب العميق للعمل ولي ، وسوف تبحث عن فرص في حلفائنا ، وتأثير ذلك على التأمين. حتى اذا كنا نستطيع أن تنطبق على المنح الدراسية ، وبالنسبة لي سيكون تشجيعا كبيرا وإعجابه.
اليوم هو 8th مارس ، اليوم الدولي للمرأة كما هو عيد ميلاد لي 20th. في هذه اللحظة من بلدي الكبار ، حريصة على أن تكون قادرة على الحصول على دعم للالخاص بك من الجوع ، وأعتقد أن هذا سيكون لي أثمن الهدايا الكبار. في اليوم مرة أخرى لطلبك كتابة ، وآمل أسرتنا الطيبة التي ترغب في المحيط الهادئ (1) ، ويمكن تحقيق ذلك.

Answer 5

Dear **,
I am **, a student from Yangzhou University, Jiangsu Province, major in International Economics and Trade. Ms.***is my mother from American International Assurance Company, Jiangsu Branch Moods business office manager. In the previous time, she has on behalf of me applied the scholarship twice via e-mail. And recently, I have received your response, which is the written letter by myself.
I have participated the national college entrance examination in June 2008. And received the offer from a key university of Jiangsu Province, Yangzhou University. My mother has mentioned many times about the scholarships issue to me, in order to encourage me to study hard. I am also proud of the chance I got from Shi Dai scholarship foundation. I have been kept the positive ambiition in my University study, and I have passed CET-4 in my first semester in the University, and I will try my best to pass the CET-6 in the next semester as soon as possible. I am good at in organizing and participating activities, and I am one member of the Cultural and Entertaiment Student Union, in order to boots up my ability. I am studying in International business, and I have gained great inspirations from this financial crisis, I sincerely hope that I can contribute my own strength to the financial industry after my graduation.
My all family members are looking forward to the co-founder Mr. Shi Dai with deep respect, who can give us support. My parents have been worked in American International Assurance Company for many years, and have achieved good performance and with great passion on this job, for me, I will also look for internship opportunities at our allies, and put my effort on insurance in the future. So if we can apply the scholarship succeed, it will be a greater encouraged and impressed for me.
Today is 8th of March , the International Women's Day and also my 20th birthday. At this moment, I am eager to be able to get support from your company. I believe this will become my most precious gift. Today, I applied once again to you, hope our family's good wishes can be achieved on the other side of the Pacific.

你一定能行哒！！！