Question

英文好的帮我改改

本人的iTunes账户因为用淘宝上的充值卡被封了，现打算给app客服回信申请要回账号，本人英语水平不高，希望英文好的朋友帮忙改改，最好正式些！
原文如下：
Dear customer service：
It's the second time I have written to you .Maybe you haven't received my previous letter. But it doesn't matter.
I'm a Chinese ipod fan and love the appstore's products very much, but China's itunes store can not satisfy me. A fiend of mine helped me register in U.S. itunes store and told me I could buy a gift card on the internet. I bought it and redeemed. But the next day I found my itunes store's account disabled. I think maybe due to this. So I hope you can restore my account. These days I'm very upset and anxiety.
At last, as a customer of apple product I wish you would pay more attention to China's huge market, especially take more effort in building itunes store, many interesting games and great products weren’t be found there. By the way, most Chinese people do not like credit card consumption .We want to get a legal gift card with a legal method!
Thank you very much for spending your precious time reading my letter. No matter the result is, please give me a response, thanks.

yours sincerely
Hai
格式，单词，句式不当的，帮忙改改！

Answer 1

Dear customer service:

This is the second time I have written to you. That's because I am now really eager to know how Apple Inc will deal with my disabled itunes account. I wonder if you have received my previous letter. But if not, I hope now is not too late.

I'm a Chinese ipod customer and I love the Itunes store's products very much, but China's itunes store can not satisfy me. A friend of mine helped me register in U.S. itunes store and told me I could buy a gift card through internet. I bought one and redeemed. But the very next day I found my itunes store's account disabled. I think this may due to the suspect certificate card. So I hope you can restore my account. These days I'm very upset and anxiety because I don't know whether I would download the free apps and music again, which is very important to me, and to my ipod touch.

At last, as a customer of apple product I wish you would pay more attention to China's huge market, especially take more effort in building itunes store, many interesting games and great products are not sold there. you know, most Chinese people do not like credit card consumption. But most apple users wish to get a legal gift card via a legal method.

Thank you very much for spending your precious time reading my letter. No matter the result is, please give me a response, thanks again.

Yours Hai