Question

将一片英语诗歌译成中文(最好不用翻译器，用也无所谓，反正不要语法错误)

in the day
in the night
say it right
say it all

you either got it
or you don't
you either stand or you fall
when your will is broken
when it slips from your hand
when there's no time for joking
there's a hole in the plan
oh you don't mean nothing at all to me
no you don't mean nothing at all to me
oh you got what it takes to set me free
oh you could mean everything to me
i can't say that i'm not lost and at fault
i can't say that i don't
love the light and the dark
i can't say that i don't know that i am alive
and all of what i feel i could show
you tonite you tonite
from my hands i could give you
something that i made
from my mouth
i could sing you another brick that i laid
from my body i could show you a place god knows
you should know the space is holy
do you really want to go?
可自己修改一下，使其更通顺，还是不要用翻译器

Answer 1

在当天

在夜间

有说的权利

说这一切

你可能得到它

或不

你要么站在或者秋天

当你将被打破

当单从你的手

的时候，那里已经没有时间开玩笑

有一个洞，计划

哦你不意味着什么，我都

没有您不意味着什么也看不到我

噢你需要采取哪些措施来建立我自由

噢你可能意味着一切都向我

我不能说我不丢失和错

我不能说我不

爱的光与暗

我不能说我不知道我还活着

和所有的什么我觉得我可以查看

you tonite you tonite （不知道怎么翻）

从我手里我可以给你

我的东西

从我的嘴

我可以唱你另一块砖，我下岗

从我的身体我可以告诉你一个地方天晓得

你应该知道的空间是神圣的

你真的想去？

用翻译器翻得 稍微改了一下 其实也没多少= =

Answer 2

在当天
在夜间
说的权利
说这一切

您可能得到它
或您不
你要么站在或者秋天
当您将被打破
当单从你的手
的时候，那里已经没有时间开玩笑
有一个洞，计划

哦你不意味着什么，我都

没有您不意味着什么也看不到我

噢你需要采取哪些措施来建立我自由

噢你可能意味着一切都向我

我不能说我不丢失和错

我不能说我不

爱的光与暗

我不能说我不知道我还活着

和所有的什么我觉得我可以查看

您tonite您tonite

从我手里我可以给你

我的东西

从我的嘴

我可以唱你另一块砖，我下岗

从我的身体我可以告诉你一个地方天晓得

你应该知道的空间是神圣的

你真的想去？

Answer 3

回答即可得2分，回答被采纳则获得悬赏分以及奖励20分in the day
in the night
say it right
say it all

you either got it
or you don't
you either stand or you fall
when your will is broken
when it slips from your hand
when there's no time for joking
there's a hole in the plan
oh you don't mean nothing at all to me
no you don't mean nothing at all to me
oh you got what it takes to set me free
oh you could mean everything to me
i can't say that i'm not lost and at fault
i can't say that i don't
love the light and the dark
i can't say that i don't know that i am alive
and all of what i feel i could show
you tonite you tonite
from my hands i could give you
something that i made
from my mouth
i could sing you another brick that i laid
from my body i could show you a place god knows
you should know the space is holy
do you really want to go?