Question

几个英语句子的翻译

中译英：1.太多的作业剥夺了孩子们童年的乐趣。（用deprive)
2.在那个城市里，很多人没日没夜地总做可还是不能满足最基本的生活需求。
英译中：It is merely a limited system of symbols,signals,sounds,or gestures that belong to a specific culture or group.It only decribes a personal map of the actural territory.
这个英译中是一段关于语言的翻译文章，这是其中两句，这个翻译我个人译了，觉得有些地方不妥，希望大家可以帮我指点纠正下：1.Too much homework deprive the children of the fun in their childhood.
2.In that city,many people work day and night but still can’t meet their most basic life needs.

它只是一个有属于一个特定文化或团体里的符号，信号，声音或者手势组成的一个受到限制的系统。它只描述了对于现实领土的一个个人的地图。

Answer 1

1.Too much homework has deprived children of their childhood happiness.
2.Although many people in that city work day and night, it's hard to meet their basic needs for life.
3它只是一个由属于一个特定文化或团体里的符号，信号，声音或者手势组成的一个有限的系统。是只能用语描述实际领土的一个个人的地图。

Answer 2

1. Joy of childhood is deprived of by too much homework.
2. In that city, many people work day and night, and still can't make ends meet.
3. 象征、符号、声音或手势并没有一个有限的系统使其归属于一个特定的文化或群体。它只能描绘实际领地的个人性的地图。

Answer 3

1 Too much homework has deprived the happiness the children shall have in their childhood
2 In that city people work with less pay and lack of sleep but still can't fulfill the basis need of life
这不能仅仅表示为一种由形象，标志，声音或者手势组成的属于特殊文化或者群体的系统，只能把它形容为人对于特定领域的私人地图

需要LZ解释这里MAP的语境

Answer 4

1）homework overloads deprives children of their childhood happiness.

2)many who lived in that city worked day and night while still unable to fulfil their basic daily needs.

这只是一个由符号，信息，声音（自己觉得在这里应该是指语言）和行为来标志一个特别文化的局限性系统，它仅仅形容了一个人所属的地理归宿。