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My beloved teacher

A good teacher is like a bright star shining in his or her students' hearts. Mr. Cheng, my first English teacher,is also the bright star shining in my heart.

when I started my learning in junior middle school, my English was poor and that really frustrated me. I abandoned myself. Besides, I was too shy to answer the teacher's questions in the class and finally Mr. Cheng got to know that. He began to help me with my lessons and also encouraged me at the same time.He said:don't be afraid,in fact you're really excellent! Believe in yourself and don't hold a gloomy view on your own abilities! From then on, I changed my mind on English and I had made a great progress later.

I have left Mr. Cheng for several (three) years,and I have never seen him.I think I have benefited from him for a lot.For example,he gave me confidence, made me stay calm and so on.I think he is a star shining in my way to success.and I will never forget him,never!
翻译:我敬爱的老师
一位好老师就像是他或者她学生心里的一颗闪耀的明星(明亮的星星)一样。程老师,我的第一任英语老师,也像是一颗星星一样在我的心里闪耀着。
当我刚开始进入初中学习的时候,我的英语很差劲。而且这也令我非常沮丧。我几乎都想放弃自己了。而且,我在课堂上由于太害羞而不敢回答老师们的提问。当程老师了解到了这些以后,他开始给我补课,同时也在鼓励我,他说,别怕,实际上你很优秀,要相信自己,千万不要怀疑自己的能力。从那时起,我就改变了对英语的看法,而且后来取得了很大的进步。
我离开程老师已经几年(三年)了,而且我之后也没有再见到他。但是,我却在他身上学到了很多。比如,他教会了我自信,沉着。我想他真的是我成功路上的一颗明星。我也不会忘掉他,永远不会!
(翻译在语序和语义上可能有些调动。)
你好啊,今天我能上网,所以立刻给你写了一篇。不知道好不好,合不合你的心意。但我希望你可以拿给你的英语老师看看,毕竟人家是专业的出身,也可以给我批改一下啊。。。我给你提个建议:写英语作文,首先要学会写身边的人和事。这样,文章才会真实,也就是“有血有肉”.我觉得写身边的事个容易令阅卷老师相信。千万不要抄阅读理解和完形填空,这样你会冒作文零分的危险。不要用长句子,如果非要这样写,那就尽量写成短句子。里面不要用深奥的语法和俚语。尽量用一些课本上出现的短语和句子。平时要多练,可以培养语感。还有就是,写完一篇文章一定要让英语学的好的同学或老师看一遍,因为不管你认为你写的有多好,你的作文中绝对会有或多或少的错误,这样他们都会及时的给你一些帮助。记住,一定要多问问。这样,你才会有提高。
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帮你找了几篇,都不错..你看看行不行..
<一>My Teacher-我的老师

My favourite teacher is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. She has two big eyes, a high nose and a little red mouth. there is always a smile on her face.

Miss Huang likes singing and collecting posters. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is good at dancing, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing.

Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favourite color is blue. Because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.

This is my favourite teacher. Our classmates all like her very much.

<二>My Teacher
My favourite teacher is my English teacher Ms Wu .Her English name is Lannie .She is a beautiful lady. She is very humorous. But sometimes she is very strict with us. But all classmates love and respect her very much. After class she often helps us learn patiently. I like my English teacher , because I think she is the best teacher in the world.

我最喜欢的老师是我的英语老师吴老师,她是个漂亮的女士,她很幽默,但是有时候她对我们非常严格,但是我们全班都很喜欢和尊敬她,课后,她也经常耐心的帮助我们学习,我喜欢我的英语老师,因为我觉得他是世界上最好的老师.

<三>My English teacher is XXX. She is young and nice. She has big eyes, a small mouth and a round face.She is humorous in class. Playing all sorts of games with us in class, she enjoys tremendous popularity among all the teachers. We like her very much because she is not only our teacher, but also our friend.

Although she is strict with us during the class, she is always happy with the smile on her face. Her class is always lively and interesting.

<四>My teacher is a really good teacher. He even loves us more than his children. Sometimes, he is strict with us. But he is often a kind man.
He usually talk some joke in the class, and all the class may laugh. He worries about all his students' studies. So he often help the students who can't study well. And he would take care of the illness student. We all like him very much.

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影响最深的人
在我的记忆中,对我影响最深刻的人要数那位每天默默无闻清理卫生的清洁工。
俗话说的好:"宁可一人脏,换来万家洁."
每天早晨,当人们还在熟睡时,辛勤的清洁工人们已经开始了一天的劳动,他们有的不到五点钟就起床了,拿起扫帚,劳动起来。他们无论刮风下雨、严寒酷暑都一如既往地清扫街道,从不会有怨言。当我们在美好的环境里生活时,可曾想过是谁为我们创造出来今天的环境,是谁让我们每天走在干干净净的马路上。清洁工人们无私为我们奉献,他们不求高额的回报,只是让人们每天生活在干净的环境里。
如果有人问我:“热吗?”我毫不犹豫回答:“热,热极了!”许多同学放学就买一些冰棒,解热也解渴。回家后大部分开上了空调,舒舒服服地睡觉。唯一清洁工人,汗水早已打湿了他们的衣服,脸被炎热的太阳晒得通红通红的。
有一次,我到学校去值日,火辣辣的太阳焦烤着大地,射的我睁不开眼睛,正看见一个清洁工阿姨在打扫学校卫生,她拿起扫帚,一下一下扫起来,灰尘扬起来到了她的眼睛里,她揉揉眼睛,继续扫起来,一滴一滴晶莹的汗珠从她的脸颊上流下来,汗水把她的衣服湿透了,她也不在乎,我被这种精神所感动了,待着迟迟不肯离去。地扫完了,她的身上早已是布满灰尘,慢慢地往回走去。
还有一次,我到楼下去玩,正玩得开心,突然看到一个穿着清洁工制服的阿姨在扫着马路上的垃圾,只见他一手拿着扫帚,一手拿着垃圾盒,边扫边不时望着两路来的车辆,就在这时,一辆车从车窗飞速扔出一个易拉罐,马上,在另一条道的车一下子“刺啦”一声,易拉罐被压得稀扁,清洁工阿姨只好上前扫开,望着她那一去一回的背影,我想:现在的人们太不知道什么是幸福了,清洁工阿姨辛辛苦苦地打扫,而很多人却乱扔垃圾,让清洁工阿姨冒着生命危险去清理。
后来,我明白了:清洁工人们为的是我们大家的环境,无私奉献,默默无闻,他们不求回报,而是换来大家美好的生活环境。宁可一人脏,换来万家洁。他虽然不平凡,可是他的那种精神很让我敬佩,牺牲自己,奉献别人。在我眼里,他们就是高尚的人!
The people most affected
In my memory, for me the most profound impact on the number of people who every day to clean up the health of cleaners unknown.
   As the saying goes: "One would rather dirty, clean in exchange for ."
   Every morning, when people are still asleep when the cleaners have been hard to start a day of labor, they have less than five minutes to get up, and picked up a broom, working together. Regardless of the weather they are, are, as always, cold summer street sweeping, never complained. While we are a better living environment, Who ever thought we created the environment today is a day we Who walk in the streets clean. Cleaners for our people and selfless dedication, they do not seek high returns, but every day people living in clean environment.
   If someone asked me: "hot?" I answered without hesitation: "hot, very hot!" A lot of students from school to buy some popsicles, antipyretic also to quench their thirst. After opening at home most of the air-conditioning, a comfortable bed. The only cleaner, sweat already wet their clothes and faces were red hot red sun.
   On one occasion, I went to school duty, coke burning sun baked the earth, I shot you blind eyes, is to see a cleaner in cleaning the school health aunt, she picked up a broom, you sweep you up, dust themselves Yang into her eyes, her eyes knead continue to sweep up, drop by drop of sweat Jingying from the upper reaches down to her cheek, sweat soaked through her clothes, she did not care, I was touched by this spirit, has been reluctant to leave alone. To besom thru, and her body is already covered with dust, walked slowly back.
   On another occasion, I went downstairs to play, is fun, suddenly to see a cleaner wearing a uniform sweep of the aunts in the garbage on the road, I saw him holding a broom in one hand and a litter box with a side edge sweep from time to time, looked at two vehicles, in this case, a car out from the window of a fast-cans immediately, Road in another car all of a sudden "thorn you" uttered by weight thin flat cans, cleaning So Aunt workers had no choice but to open up, looked at her that a return to the background, I think: It is now too much of people do not know what is happiness, and cleaners to clean the hard aunts, and many people littering, Aunt so the cleaners to clear away the danger of their lives.
   Later, I see: people to the cleaners for all of us to the environment, and selfless dedication, and unknown, they do not redound, but we get a better living environment. Rather dirty one, in exchange for cleaning . Although he was not extraordinary, but he is the kind of spirit I admire their sacrifice and dedication of others. In my eyes, they are noble people!
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There are some important people in my life. I really want to thank them expecially my mother. She is also the most important person in my life!When I was young,my mother took me to school every day.And she always gets up early to cook breakfast for me.When I am ill,my mother looks after me carefully.Now I am in Grade 9,and I stay up late every day. My mother doesn't go to sleep until I finish my homework. She gives me a lot of love but never asks me to thank her.So I really want wo thank my mother! 自己当场写的 保证没有语法错误 希望能帮到你!~!~
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