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Shanghaiisaninternationalcity.Weshouldlearnhowtobelovelycitizens.First,weshouldnotlea...
Shanghai is an international city.We should learn how to be lovely citizens.First,we should not leave rubbish.We should keep our city clean.Next,we should learn English well.Then,we must be friendly to other people.Finally,we can't do anything that isn't allowed.We should do our best to make our city more lovely.
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Shanghai is an international city.We should learn how to be lovely citizens.First,we should not leave rubbish.We should keep our city clean.Next,we should learn English well.Then,we must be friendly to other people.Finally,we shouldn't do anything that isn't allowed.We should do our best to make our city more lovely.
把first......then......改为firstly......secondly......更好
把first......then......改为firstly......secondly......更好
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Shanghai is an international city, thus we should learn how to be responsible citizens.Firstly,we should not dump rubbish without throwing into the garbagebin.And We should keep our city clean.Secondly,we should learn English well.Thirdly,we must be friendly to other people.Finally,we can't do anything that isn't allowed.We should try our best to make our city more lovely.
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