Question

请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误：“事实上，我是非常认真对待这门学科的。我认为，我们学。。。”

（中文是想要表达的意思，翻译不必和中文完全一样）

中文部分：
事实上，我是非常认真对待这门学科的。我认为，我们学科的价值在于对代码的实际应用。我分析我这次final开始没有发挥得很好的原因，在于我将所有的重点都放在了 practice the skills，而没有很好的去熟记theory。但我依然认为这次final exam的成绩不能真实的反映出我对这门课程的掌握。

我的翻译：
Actually, I was very seriously to face this subject. In my opinion, the value of this subject is practice the skills into project. I analyzed the reason why I did not do my paper exam very well, I think I spend more time to practice the skills and not spend enough time to learn the theory. But I think the result of my final exam cannot prove the real knowledge I have handled.

Answer 1

先说你的问题：

was serious facing...不能用副词seriously
the value of .... is to practicing不定式或者是is practicing
应用不能是practice into，应该是apply the skills to actual projects 将能力应用到实际的项目中。
I analyzed the reason why I did not do my paper exam very well, I think I spend more time to practice the skills and not spend enough time to learn the the 这个well后是句号，必须分句，因为前后有两个动词。

i think.....the theory这一句最好用too...to 句型，然后是过去式spent，最好是完成时have spent
最后的逻辑关系不是但，应该是因此，所以不用but，用consequently, therefore, thus都可以作为结尾。

然后给你改一下：
事实上，我是非常认真对待这门学科的。我认为，我们学科的价值在于对代码的实际应用。我分析我这次final开始没有发挥得很好的原因，在于我将所有的重点都放在了 practice the skills，而没有很好的去熟记theory。但我依然认为这次final exam的成绩不能真实的反映出我对这门课程的掌握。

我的翻译：
In fact, I have treated this subject seriously. I believe that real application is what the subject is all about. After scrutinizing the reasons why I haven't exerted my full potential in the exam, I found that I put most of my efforts in practicing the skills rather than memorize the theories. Consequently, I don't think what my final grade have showed can accurately reflect my ability in this subject.

Answer 2

Actually, I was very serious about this subject. I think the significance of the subject lies in putting skills we learnt into practice. In retrospection, I analysed why I did not do well in this final exam, which might be that I put too much effort in "practising the skills" instead of learning the theories. However, I still believe that the outcome of this exam could not truly reflect the knowledge I learnt in this subject.

这是改过的版本。你的英文有点中式，加油吧。