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“数码热升华”是当前欧美最流行的纺织品印花技术。它采用特殊的染料墨水，使用先进的数码喷绘技术，将设计完美的图案打印在专用的转移纸上。然后，将转移纸上的图案用专用的设备加热、加压，使转移纸上图案的染料分子与纺织品（布料）的分子相结合，从而在纺织品上形成绚丽多彩的图案。

我译成：
"Digital Sublimation" is currently the most popular European and American textile printing technology. It uses the special dye-based ink and the advanced digital inkjet technology, and then design the perfect logo printed on special transfer paper. The transfer of paper patterns used q special equipment for heating, pressure, so that the transfer of the pattern paper and textile dye molecules (cloth) molecules combine to form a colorful textile patterns.

Answer 1

It uses the special dye-based ink and the advanced 我觉得这里两个the不需要

design the perfect logo printed on special transfer paper
这句应该倒一下吧，改成
print perfect designed logo on special transfer paper

for heating , pressure改成get heated and pressured

combine 改成can get combined

这是我的想法~ 希望对你有帮助..

Answer 2

个人认为第一句应该改为"Digital Sublimation" is the most popular textile printing technology in European and American currently.