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求批改一篇英语作文 谢谢

Don't judge a book by its cover
Welive in a complex world. In the world, there are good things and terriblethings. Let's see some contrary groups, beautiful persons and ugly persons,noble person and humble person, the rich and the poor, warmhearted person andcriminal person, honest person and tricky person. Just like every coin has twosides. Every thing also has its counterpart. Clearly distingushing them is animportant skill for us.
Asa famous saying goes, don't judge a book by its cover. I really experienced asimilar situation. One day, I was looking for a data in library in myuniversity. The appropriate data had not been founded for a long time. FinallyI difficultly found a book. What's worse,the book is really old. It's cover wasold enough,too. What bothers me a lot was a mark on the page 2 said "Wrotedown in 1928", but the thing waiting for me next is amazing.Oh! Thecontent of the book is useful a lot! Since then,I haven't judged a book by itscover.
Beautifulperson doesn't mean that she has a wonderful heart. Do not believe other peopleeasily. Rational judgement is important in our life. For instance, when we arebrowsing all kinds of news online, we can never know the whole story well onlyby reading the oversimplified--sometimes even misleading -headlines. Actually,we should not make a judgement on anything hastily until we've studied itcompletely.
In my opinion, in order to make rational judgements, we'd better spend enough timeand energy to understand a person or a thing before drawing any conclusion.

上述文字有问题 没问题的文字在这里
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Answer 1

1.1 Don't judge a book by its cover
[句子错误] 请检查Do，确认主谓一致。
1.2 Welive in a complex world.
[句子错误] 请检查句中谓语动词。
1.3 In the world, there are good things and terriblethings.
[词语错误] 请检查terriblethings，确认拼写正确。
1.4 Let's see some contrary groups, beautiful persons and ugly persons,noble person and humble person, the rich and the poor, warmhearted person andcriminal person, honest person and tricky person.
[词语错误] 请检查andcriminal，确认拼写正确。

[批改提示] person表示“人”。注意与people的区别。详情点击
1.5 Just like every coin has twosides.
[词语错误] 请检查twosides，确认拼写正确。
1.6 Every thing also has its counterpart.
[批改提示] 查看every thing和everything的区别。

1.7 Clearly distingushing them is animportant skill for us.
[词语错误] 请检查distingushing，确认拼写正确。
[批改提示] 查看clearly与clear的区别。
2.1 Asa famous saying goes, don't judge a book by its cover.
[句子错误] 请检查do，确认主谓一致。

2.2 I really experienced asimilar situation.
[词语错误] 请检查asimilar，确认拼写正确。

2.3 One day, I was looking for a data in library in myuniversity.
[其他] 请检查a data in library，本族语中很少使用。
[词语错误] 请检查myuniversity，确认拼写正确。
2.4 The appropriate data had not been founded for a long time.
2.5 FinallyI difficultly found a book.

2.6 What's worse,the book is really old.
2.7 It's cover wasold enough,too.
[词语错误] 请检查wasold，确认拼写正确。
2.8 What bothers me a lot was a mark on the page 2 said "Wrotedown in 1928", but the thing waiting for me next is amazing.Oh!
2.9 Thecontent of the book is useful a lot!
2.10 Since then,I haven't judged a book by itscover.
[词语错误] 请检查itscover，确认拼写正确。

3.1 Beautifulperson doesn't mean that she has a wonderful heart.

3.2 Do not believe other peopleeasily.
[词语错误] 请检查peopleeasily，确认拼写正确。
3.3 Rational judgement is important in our life.
3.4 For instance, when we arebrowsing all kinds of news online, we can never know the whole story well onlyby reading the oversimplified--sometimes even misleading -headlines.
[词语错误] 请检查onlyby，确认拼写正确。
[批改提示] all kinds of的近义表达有a great variety of。
3.5 Actually,we should not make a judgement on anything hastily until we've studied itcompletely.
[词语错误] 请检查itcompletely，确认拼写正确。

4.1 In my opinion, in order to make rational judgements, we'd better spend enough timeand energy to understand a person or a thing before drawing any conclusion.
[动词错误] 请检查spend enough timeand energy to understand，确认动词用法正确。
[词语错误] 请检查timeand，确认拼写正确。
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这是复制出现了错误 WeLive in=We live in我就是现在批改网论坛批改过了然后再来求修改的

Answer 2

稍作修改，供参考。

Don't judge a book by its cover

We live in a complex world. In this world,there are good things and bad things. Some contrary pairs of examples could be--beautiful and ugly, noble and humble, the rich and the poor, warmhearted and criminal, honest and tricky. Just like every coin has two sides, everything has its counterpart. To be able to clearly distinguish them is an important skill for us.

A famous saying goes that don't judge a book by its cover. I know it's true because I've really experienced a similar situation. One day, I was looking for some data in a library of my university. At first, I couldn't find the right data I needed. However, after a hard search for it, I finally found a book. It was such an old book that almost looked like an antique. Its cover was old enough, too. What bothered me a lot was a mark on the second page saying that "Written in 1928", but the thing waiting for me next was amazing. Oh! The contents of the book were of a great use. Since then, I haven't judged a book by its cover.

Beautiful person doesn't mean that she or he has a wonderful heart. Do not believe other people easily. Rational judgment is important in our life. For instance, when we are browsing all kinds of news online, we would never know the whole story well only by reading the oversimplified-sometimes even misleading-headlines.

Actually, we should not make a judgment onanything hastily until we've studied it completely. In my opinion, in order to make rational judgments, we'd better spend enough time and energy to understand a person or a thing before drawing any conclusion.

Answer 3

总体来说文章结构没有什么大问题哦，就是用词上可能还需要再斟酌一下，用一些比较学术性、规范的词来替代一些大路货的词，比如good和terrible. 然后句式可以再整齐一些。这些都是我个人的小建议。
有需要还可以试试批改网人工批改，可能有帮助！