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短文改错，求大神。在线等急！

短文改错，求大神。在线等急！Last Sunday ，the weather ware good .In the morning ，I went the bookstore by bus .There were many new book in the bookstore .I didn't know which one to buy .At Last ，I decide to buy two English books because of I wanted to improve my English .In theafternoon，I want to the cinema with my classmates to see a film， that was amazing China. A film was so wonderful that all of us were deep moved.One of my classmates said he would like to see them again.what a meaningful but happy day it was ！

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有几处错误啊

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有几处句子不太理解啊，比如:that was amazing China.那是个了不起的中国。。是电影的名字叫中国吗，还有一处开头几句中又一个单词ware 要改的话是was，这两没相似点啊。。。

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