Question

英语作文改错

My favorite famous people is Micheal Jakson. I really want to meet him.
You know, he is a famous successful dancer in the world. Everyone know him. So I really want to meet this legend people.
And then, I will beg him to teach me some dance movements. I have dreamed that for a long time.
Finally, I’m sure I will tell him clearly how deeply I love him. I think this is my best chance to explain I admire him and love him.
But, you know, I’m hopelessness he has been dead. Of course, he live in my heart forever.

Answer 1

My favorite famous people is Micheal Jakson. I really want to meet him.
You know, he 【was】 a famous successful dancer in the world. Everyone 【knows】 him. So I really want to meet this legend people.
And then, I will beg him to teach me some dance movements. I have dreamed that for a long time.
Finally, I’m sure I will tell him clearly how deeply I love him. I think this is my best chance to 【express my admire and love to him】.
But, you know, I’m 【hopeless，for】 he has 【died】. Of course, he 【lives】 in my heart forever.
大致改了下词，语法上虽然没问题，但在表达上还可以有改进

Answer 2

My favorite famous people is Micheal Jakson. I really want to meet him. people--person
You know, he is a famous successful dancer in the world. Everyone know(s) him. So I really want to meet this legend people(person).
And then, I will beg him to teach me some dance movements. I have dreamed that for a long time.
Finally, I’m sure I will tell him clearly how deeply I love him. I think this is my best chance to explain I admire him and love him.
But, you know, I’m hopeless(ness) he has been dead. Of course, he (will) live in my heart forever.

Answer 3

My favorite famous people is Micheal Jakson. I really want to meet him.
You know, he is a famous successful dancer in the world. Everyone (knows) him. So I really want to meet this legend people.
And then, I (would) beg him to teach me some dance movements. I have dreamed (of) that for a long time.
Finally, I’m sure I (would) tell him clearly (abou)t how deeply I love him. I think this (would be) my best chance to (express) I admire him and (my) love (for) him.
But, you know, (it's) (hopeless) (because) he has (died). Of course, he live in my heart forever.

Answer 4

My favorite famous people(person) is Micheal Jakson. I really want to meet him.
You know, he is a famous successful dancer in the world. Everyone know(s) him. So I really want to meet this legend people(person).
And then, I will(would) beg him to teach me some dance (movements). I have dreamed that for a long time.
(Finally,) I'm sure I will(would) tell him clearly how deeply I love him. I think this is my best chance to explain how I admire him and love him.
But, you know, I'm hopelessness(disappointed that) he has passed away. Of course, he live(s) in my heart forever.