Question

英语作文错误

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分类: 教育/科学 >> 外语学习
问题描述:

这是我英语考试时的作文，老师说错了几处，大家看看哪错了： Dear Shirley, You asked me what my favorite things are except study,now,let me tell you.First thing,is surf on inter.Because I can play puter games,talk with my friends and study for this way,It is so interesting and relaxing.The second,is collect stamps.And I like listen musics.Pop musics are very cool,and lassical musics make me relax. Yours.

解析:

You asked me what my favorite things are except study(应该用besides而不是except;what my favorite things are, besides study.)

now,(一个句子的首字母要大写应该为:Now,)

let me tell you.

One thing is surf(ing) on the inter.Because (In that case,)I can play puter games,talk with my friends and study for(in) this way,(.)

It is so interesting and relaxing(fortable).The second,(Another thing )is collect(ing) stamps.And I like listen (to the) music.Pop music(music是不可数名词,不能加s) are(is) very cool,and lassical(classical) music make(s) me relax.

Yours.(,应该用逗号,而且,要另起一行)

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