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您好，首先感谢能在百忙中抽空阅读我的材料，希望能在贵公司得到一个锻炼的机会。
通过对贵公司的了解，本人诚意加入贵公司，希望成为贵公司的一员并愿意竭力为贵公司奉献自己的一份力量，我毕业于苏州农学院的食品科学专业，已经有近4年的工作经验，

先后供职于3个公司。第一份工作是毕业前在江苏挺卫实业有限公司，担任品研处品管一职，主要工作是负责茶饮料的原料、辅料、材料的进厂验收，及对半成品、成品的理化和

微生物检测，配合ISO9001和HACCP年审工作，等一系列的品质管理工作。
第二份工作是在上海大山合集团，担任质量管理部体系主管一职，主要负责ISO9001、 ISO2200(HACCP) 、BRC、 HALAL认证审核工作，包括审核前准备、审核中陪同、审核后

整改的一系列的完整流程。
第三份工作是在宁波音王集团担任品质中心体系专员，主要负责ISO9001、 ISO14001内、外部审核，跟进和验证不符合项的整改。负责体系文件的标准化管理、发行和回收，组

织公司的内部审核管理并对内审员和车间主管进行培训。
虽然我拥有4年的丰富工作经验，但是对于我来说这远远不够，还需要努力去学习工作中的不足与欠缺，希望贵公司能给我一个锻炼的机会，我会还您一份成绩。
相信您的信任和我的实力，会带来共同的成功！

Answer 1

您好，首先感谢能在百忙中抽空阅读我的材料，希望能在贵公司得到一个锻炼的机会。
Dear sir or madam,
Thank you first for taking time to read my materials. I really hope to get an opportunity for practicing in your company.

通过对贵公司的了解，本人诚意加入贵公司，希望成为贵公司的一员并愿意竭力为贵公司奉献自己的一份力量。
From what I have learnt about your company, I sincerely desire to join your company as a member of your staff and try my best to contribute to the development of your company.

我毕业于苏州农学院的食品科学专业，已经有近4年的工作经验，先后供职于3个公司。第一份工作是毕业前在江苏挺卫实业有限公司，担拍燃银任品研处品管一职，主要工作是负责茶饮料的原料、辅料、材料的进厂验收，及对半成品、成品的理化和微生物检测，配合ISO9001和HACCP年审工作，等一系列的品质管理工作。
Since I graduated from Suzhou Agricultural College with the major in Food Science, I have been working for 4 years and worked for 3 companies successively. My first job is quality assurance management of Product Research Dept. in Jiangsu Tingwei Industrial Co., Ltd., even before my graduation. There I was mainly responsible for receiving inspection of the raw materials, accessories and other materials for the tea beverages, for physical, chemical and biological testing of semi-finished and finished products, for assisting and coordinating the annual verification of ISO9001 and HACCP, as well as other series quality assurance related work.

第二份工作是在上海大山合集团，担任质量管理部体系主管一职，主要负责ISO9001、 ISO2200(HACCP) 、BRC、 HALAL认证审核工作，包括审核前准备、审核中陪同、审核后整改的一系列的完整流程。
After that, I worked as QA System Supervior for Shanghai Dashanhe Group, in charge of quality cerfitication for such as ISO9001, ISO2200(HACCP), BRC and HALAL, including a complete process of pre-audit preparation, in-audit accompaniment and post-audit rectification.

第三份工作是在宁波音王集团担任品质中心体系专员，主要负责ISO9001、 ISO14001内、外部审核，跟进和验证不符合项的整改。负责体系文件的标准化管理、发行和回收，组织公司的内部段旅审核管理并对内袭宴审员和车间主管进行培训。
And then I worked as System Executive, QA Center in Ningbo Yinwang Group, in charge of internal and external audit for ISO9001 and ISO14001, follow-up and verification of non-conformity rectification, standardization management, dissemination and retrival of QA system documents, organization of interal audit and trainging on internal auditors as well as workshop heads.

虽然我拥有4年的丰富工作经验，但是对于我来说这远远不够，还需要努力去学习工作中的不足与欠缺，希望贵公司能给我一个锻炼的机会，我会还您一份成绩。相信您的信任和我的实力，会带来共同的成功！
Although I have already owned these 4-year working experience, it is far away for me to head for a long way. I still need to work harder to rectify my shorts and disadvantages. I am eager to have this opportunity to be given by you and you will deserve my contribution and achievements. I believe your trust and my capabilities will lead to a win-win success.

Answer 2

Hello, first of all thanks for taking the time in reading my material, hope you get a chance to exercise.
By understanding your company, I am serious about joining your company, hopes to become a member of your company and willing to strive to contribute your own strength, I graduated from Suzhou Agricultural food science, for nearly 4 years experience

Has worked at three companies. First job before graduation Ting Wei Industrial Co., Ltd. in Jiangsu Province, as the product quality control research and post office, the main work is to drink tea, raw materials, auxiliary materials, materials into the factory acceptance, and the semi-finished products of the chemical and

Microbial detection, with the ISO9001 and HACCP annual examination, and a series of quality management.
The second is to group together in Shanghai in the mountains, as director of Quality Management System in the post, is mainly responsible for ISO9001, ISO2200 (HACCP), BRC, HALAL certification audit, including audit preparation, audit, accompanied, after review

Rectification of a series of full flow.
The third is in Ningbo King Music Group as a quality center system commissioner, is responsible for ISO9001, ISO14001 and external audits, follow up and verify the items do not meet the rectification. Responsible for the standardization of document management systems, distribution and recovery, group

Organization's internal audit management and internal auditors and the head of the training workshop.
Although I have four years of rich work experience, but not enough for me, it is also essential to learning the professional shortcomings and Qianque, and hope you can give me a 锻炼 the chance, I will also you to a Chengji .
I believe your trust and my strength, will bring together a success