Question

高手帮我看看，这几句英语有什么语法错误或者用词不当？谢了！

百度改版改的真垃圾！
(A) In the last three mounth of the year, attendance were off their september peak, falling back by 300,000 vistor a mounth till the end of the year.
(B) during last year, the trend was obviously upwards.
(c) Numbers picked up in June, rocketing by almost 400%.
(D) There was a marked improvement in July with the number of vistors surging 500%.
(E) From may through to september, the number of people visting the theme park mounthly rose approximately 70%.
(F) During the first four months, vistor numbers rose gradually.
(G) The gradual rise in vistor number numbers from 30,000 to approximately 45,000 in the first four mounth was followed by a shaper incrase in May.
(H) Between Apirl and May, the increase in the number of vistors was at a much slower pace than in the previous three mounths.
(I) It is clear that for most of the year, monthly attentnces were above trend.

Answer 1

A. In the last /past 应用现在完成时：have been off..
B.was 改成has been
C. rocketing 改成 increasing，
我认为数字是增加（increase）不是上升（rocket），这个不确定
D.surging by 500% （百分数前应加by 或者to ，说明上涨了或上涨到）
E.rose 改成 has （had) risen
F.rose 改成 have risen
G.shaper 改成 sharp （“明显”的意思）
H. than后加 that in the previous three mounths
I.were 改成have been being（表示情况一直是这样的）
原因 for most of the year应用现在完成时吧，并且现在情况仍这样发展，就用现在完成进行时

我不是高手，但想帮忙，希望能为你提供些帮助

Answer 2

在哪里？看不到啊？

Answer 3

mounth，vistor，mounthly ，