Question

我写了一篇英语作文，帮我修改一下好吗？非常感谢你！

The moment I was praised by my mother
At home, my mother always praises me. When I finished homework, my mother praised me. She said, ‘You're a love learning’s good boy.’When I finished, I washed dishes and my mother praised me. She said, ‘You're a love working's good boy.’Hear the sound of praise, I was happy. At that moment, I thought, my mother worked hard and she was tired. Therefore, I have to study hard and return to her. Thank you, mother.

Answer 1

The moment I was praised by my mother
My mother is the best person in my eyes. When I finished homework, my mother praised me. She said, ‘You're a struggling boy.’After finished, I washed dishes and my mother praised me again. She said, ‘You're a good boy.’Hearing the praise, I was happy. At that moment, I thought, my mother had been working hard and she was tired. In return, I have to study harder an. Thank you,my dear mother,for every little thing you did for me.

说真的，有点难度啊 不过还好，楼主文采斐然，改好后还是挺棒的，继续加油啊！O(∩_∩)O哈哈~

对了，别忘加分哦

Answer 2

嗯，写得不错，没有什么可以修改的。

Answer 3

你写的什麼哦 ~
越写越瞥！！！

Answer 4

呃……你这个第一句是个一般现在时，而且有个一般现在时的“always”，你后面那几个“When”啥啥啥的就应该用一般现在时。整个作文的时态给老师一种很奇怪的感觉。想要不大改，第一句最好删掉。改成别的。
还有那个“love learning’s good boy”，非常不专业，倒不如写成struggling（努力的）孩子，还有“’Hear the sound of praise，I was happy”重大语法错误！一个句子两个动词，一个皇上能有两个皇后吗？改成hearing.
感情表达不够强烈。比如在“mother”前面加上个“my dear”，这样不是更好？