Question

帮我修改下英语作文，高手快来！

假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter层表示希望来中国教书。你校现在需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括：
1.教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英语等
2.授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）
3.工作量：
—每周12学时，任选三门课
—担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor）
Dear Peter,
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China.Our school currently is in need of a foreign teacher,which enables you to have a chance to realize what you wished.
If you come ,it is 3 curriculars that you are able to choose from the following courses including Spoken English,Wrriten English,America Today as well as Britain Today,etc. for your teaching 12 hours on a weekly basis. Quanties of senior high school students who take these courses will have at least 3 years of English learning experience.In addition,you will assume responsibilities to be an advisor to（为什么要用to） our students' English club or our school's English newspaper.
Please let me know fo you are interested and if you have any other questions.I'd be more than happy to help.
Best,
Li Hua
开头、结尾以及I remember…是题目给定的。如果有更好的单词、短语替换，就给点建议吧，谢谢了。
be assumed to be是什么意思，不好意思，assume这个词我第一次使用。
12 hours on a weekly basis 用作状语可以不？
还有括号里的问题，谁帮我解答啊。

Answer 1

1."currently"最好放在句首。
2. which这个定语从句可以改为"which is a good chance for you."，原来那句感觉有点别扭。
3.第二段第一句“if you are willing to accept this job, you are required to choose 3 courses from the following”
4.“今日英语”应该是“english today”,这个应该是笔误。
5. 12 hours on a weekly basis这个短语可以做状语，但是这个短语本身一般都说“12 hours a week”就可以了。
6.教授对象那句改为“you will teach senior high school students who have learned english at least 3 years”
7.assume常用意思有两个，一个是“假设”一个是“承担”，两个都是及物动词，be assumed to be 就要视情况而定是什么意思了
8. “为什么要用to”，个人认为用for更合适些
9.最后一句中的if打错了

Answer 2

If you come ,it is 3 curriculars that you are able to choose from(it到from改为You are able to choose 3 of them from) the following courses(curriculums) including(which include) Spoken English,Wrriten English,America Today as well as Britain Today,etc. for your teaching(for到teaching改为The teaching task here is) 12 hours on a weekly basis. Quanties of(quanties of去掉） senior high school students who take these courses will have at least 3 years of English learning experience.In addition,you will assume responsibilities to be an advisor to（为什么要用to） our students' English club or our school's English newspaper.

be assumed to be 假设为，假定
这里的to连接接受者，英语俱乐部或是英语报这里为接受者

Answer 3

My future life
I have been dreaming of living in a quiet place and having peaceful,free life.On this point,I am different from most people who hope to live in big cities and strike for money.So I want to be a freelancer some day.To rent a house in the suburb ,to feed a cute dog,to plant some flowers, to control my time freely...These all are my real ideas in my deep mind.
Maybe you think I am not that postive about life.Actually,I don't think so,in my opinion, only those people who are in quiet and peaceful can understand the essence of real life.with the help of such a life,I will be happier than any other ways to live.

Answer 4

嗯，但要注意格式哦