Question

请高手帮我修改一下，下面的英文翻译。 可能有些语法错误。谢过了！！！

衷心的感谢您能在百忙中回复我。
也十分感谢你的耐心的说明和鼓励使我明白了许多事情，同时也给了我很大的勇气与信心。
我将在做好本职工作的的同时，继续努力学习机械方面的相关知识以及2D机械图，以储备足够的知识，准备迎接机会的到来。我也会及时向您汇报我的学习进度。
另外，感觉你的夸奖，我的英语水平也不是很好，但我会努力学习的。
再次感谢你的耐心解释。

Thank you very much for taking the time to reply to me

Also very grateful for your patient explanation and encouragement, it makes me to understand many things, but also gave me a lot of courage and confidence.

I will be doing a good job working, and keep on to study mechanical knowledge and 2D mechanical draft, to reserve sufficient knowledge in preparation for the opportunity.

In addition, thank you for your praise, my English is not so good, but I will try to learn.

Thanks again for your patience to explain.

Answer 1

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Also very grateful for your patient explanation and encouragement, it makes me to understand many things, (but)<用and,因为你的句子意思是承接的,不是转折> also gave me a lot of courage and confidence.

I will (be doing)<直接加do就可以> a good (job working)<直接用work就可以>, and keep (on to study)<studing> mechanical knowledge and 2D mechanical draft, to reserve sufficient knowledge in preparation for the opportunity.

In addition, thank you for your praise, my English is not so good, but I will try to learn.

Thanks again for your patience to explain
希望可以帮到你!

Answer 2

I really appreciate that you have given me your reply, given your full schedule. （这句表达··）
Also, I am very grateful for your patient explanation and encouragement, and it not only Made me understand many things, but also gave me a lot of courage and confidence.（开始语法··be grateful ）

I will do a good job , and keep on to study mechanical knowledge and 2D mechanical draft, to reserve sufficient knowledge in preparation for the opportunity.

In addition, thanks for your praise, my English is not so good, but I will try to learn.
Thanks for your patience to explain again