Question

英语改错十处

Today is Sunday.The sky is full of sunshine ,so does my life .At about 9:00a.m.,I go to the bookstore with my friends.There was a lot of new books.I didn’t know which one to buy ,because there books were all use to me .At last ,I chose two.
At 10:00,we went to the cinema .The film calling Titanic was very popular .It took us about 3 hours to see.Having seen the film,and everyone was deeply moved.Some friends even burst out tears.From the story,I understand that love is noble and valuable.That’s a really wongderful film .It is very worth seeing again.
What a happy day!I hope tom orrow I will be even happy!

Answer 1

第二排was改为are , didn't改为don't,there改为those,were改为are,two后面加上of them,went改为go,calling改为called,was改为is,took改为takes,see改为watch,was改为is,out改为into,漂亮的wanderful,even改为more
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