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However, home cooked meals are healthy while canteen meals are not.
第三段 they both very改成they are both very..
第三段 is popular around改成are popular with
第三段 home cooked meals is make family taste happiness改成home cooked meals are made according to one's taste
第三段 home cooked meals evironment....with classmates 改成The place where home cooked meals are served is quiet with families while canteen is always noisy and full of students.
第四段太啰嗦，整段改成
Thirdly, both home cooked meals and cantenn meals are very cheap. However, compared to the weight of the same course served in home cooked meals and cantenn meals, home cooked meals are heavier
最后一段改成 I prefer home made meals to cantenn meals.
However, home cooked meals are healthy while canteen meals are not.
第三段 they both very改成they are both very..
第三段 is popular around改成are popular with
第三段 home cooked meals is make family taste happiness改成home cooked meals are made according to one's taste
第三段 home cooked meals evironment....with classmates 改成The place where home cooked meals are served is quiet with families while canteen is always noisy and full of students.
第四段太啰嗦，整段改成
Thirdly, both home cooked meals and cantenn meals are very cheap. However, compared to the weight of the same course served in home cooked meals and cantenn meals, home cooked meals are heavier
最后一段改成 I prefer home made meals to cantenn meals.
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