Question

请帮我翻译几句英文，谢谢！

这是我发消息给你这么久以来你第一次读我的消息.

请再帮我修改一个句子,谢谢!
I can't find words to express how excited I was when I received your letter.

Answer 1

It's the first time you read my message (sent to you) for so long a time.

你那个句子挺好的~
如果说I cannot find a/any word ...可能会稍微好一点~

Answer 2

It's first time for you to read my message since I have sent messages for long.

I can't get any words to express how I am excited when I receive your letter.

Answer 3

correct english sentence

Answer 4

这样很好：
“I can't find any word to express how excited I was when I received your letter.”

Answer 5

It is the first time that you have read my massage since I sent one.
(修改的同意“I can't find any word to express how excited I was when I received your letter.”）