Question

求哪个哥哥姐姐，给写篇作文，还有短文改错。🙏

Answer 1

改错：按文章顺序 

1. when-that ; 2. very-warm-hearted/或者去掉；3.that-who;4. give-gives;5. fall-fell; 6. carried-put; 7.took good care+of; 8.helping-help; 9.with-without ; 10, story-stories 

作文看不清，给你写几句吧。

     I have been a senior school student for several months. I enjoyed those days. Although, I had to solve problems in my studying and communicating. In fact, I made a lot of friends. We got together to study hard and play games. And I must introduce one of them who was my best friend.Her name is Liu Jiayin. She is my deskmate. She is a warm-hearted girl. She helped me a lot.

    However, I still miss you so much. How was your school life going? You can ask me for help if I am needed. I am waiting for your letter.

    Best wishes for you.                                                                  

                                                                                      Sincerely yours

                                                                                                   xxx