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There are many details we should pay more attention in our life. For example, you should check faucet and pipe line of water pipe, see whether leak. Then you need make sure to repair dripping faucets by replacing washers. Though that can be thought a piece of cake, even is leak a small drop water , a month will flow a great amount water. It is not just a kind of waste, and you have to pay for the waste. Take agriculture into account, agricultural restructuring will continue. We should use less water of agriculture. Take strict measures to adjust agricultural structure and develop ecological agriculture. The main problem of water shortage lies in tradition patterns of agriculture. We should first develop water-saving agriculture. Then increase in the utilization of water and expand the effective irrigation area of farmland. The same problem also exist in industry.
The third way is to take strict measures to adjust agricultural and industrial structure and develop ecological agriculture and industry. Take agriculture into account, agricultural restructuring will continue. We should use less water of agriculture. The main problem of water shortage lies in tradition patterns of agriculture. We should first develop water-saving agriculture. Then increase in the utilization of water and expand the effective irrigation area of farmland. The same problem also exist in industry. We can take measures to circulate water for industry over and over in factovies and treated sewage water is for irrigation in farming land. That can not only solve the problem of sewage water but also save water. Then pay more attention and concern to conserve water resource. Make good use of science and technology to promote water saving. In developing and utilizing water resources and in controlling water disaaters, planning should be performed in a comprehensive and systematic manner with all aspects taken into account and with empaases on multiple purpose uses and achieving maximum benefits so as to allow full play to the multiple function of wter resources.

Answer 1

There are many details we should pay more attention in our life.
pay attention是不及物的，后面必须要加to

For example, you should check faucet and pipe line of water pipe, see whether leak.
这里一个句子有两个谓语动词，应该在see前面加and或者to，加and表示“你应该检查水龙头，管道和看看下水道是不是泄漏”；加to则表示“你应该检查水龙头，管道以便知道下水道是不是泄漏”。
whether leak的表达应该是错的，whether做连词，引导一个从句。改为 whether it is leak

Then you “need to make sure ”to repair

even it leaks a small drop of water

it will flow a great amount water in a month

。。。。是不是翻译器翻译的。。。。