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My most unforgettable moment took place in a year ago.Almost at the end of a basketball game,our team and an other team gainer the same points.I was guarded the girl with the ball.I had to get the ball and score immediate to win the game!Fortunately,I got them!There were about eight second left,and I could hear my team screaming.I was so excited which I threw the ball into the net without think!The game was over.Whatever,I found that I had thrown the ball into our team's net!From this,I learned that it was OK to get excited,but you still had to concentrate what you were doing.

文中共有10处语言错误 每句中最多有2处 错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改 有的句子没有错误

Answer 1

1 in a year ago去掉in
2 our team and an other team gainer把gainer改为gained
3 I was guarded the girl 把guarded改为guarding
4 score immediate 把immediate改为immediately
5 Fortunately,I got them把them改为it
6 eight second把second改为seconds
7 so excited which 把which改为that
8 without think把think改为thinking
9 Whatever改为However
10 still had to concentrate 后面加on

Answer 2

a year ago, 去掉in
an other team,the other team
gainer, gained
immediately
i got it
were ,was
seconds
so excited that
without thinking

Answer 3

1.in a year ago,去掉in
2。gainer改成gained
3。 guarded 改成guarding
4。 immediate改成immediately
5。them改成it
6。second改成seconds
7。which改成that
8。think改成thinking
9。Whatever改成However
10。concentrate what you were doing. 改成concentrate on what you were doing