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I learned from today's biology class that our brain can store informations in a way similar with how information can be stored in a computer. That is the ability to store knowledge that enables us to think. If we are unable to remember which has just been said, we will be able to carry out even the simplest conversation. Memory is essential for using a language. Language finally enables us to communicate with complex messages
to other people. The brain made up of two halves. For many actions, all parts of the brain work together, but there are activities that involves only one side. For example, write and talking are controlled by the left side of the brain.

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Answer 1

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I learned from today's biology class that our (brain改成brains) can store (informations改成information) in a way similar (with改成to) how information can be stored in a computer. (That改成It) is the ability to store knowledge that enables us to think. If we are unable to remember (which改成what) has just been said, we will (加入not 或 will改成won't 或 把后面的able改成unable) be able to carry out even the simplest conversation. Memory is essential for using a language. Language finally enables us to communicate (去掉with) complex messages to other people. The brain (加入is) made up of two halves. For many actions, all parts of the brain work together, but there are activities that (involves改成involve) only one side. For example, (write改成writing) and talking are controlled by the left side of the brain.

Answer 2

I learned--i have learned // informations--information // similar with---similar to // remember which has been---remember what has been// we will be able---we will not be able 或者we will be unable// communicate with complex messages--communicate complex messages// the brain made up---the brain is made up/// activities that involves--activities that involve/// write and talking---writing and talking