Question

语法错误

看一看下面这篇信有没有语法错误。
Hello Daniel and your family! How are you? Do you know me? These months, I couldn't write some letters because I was very busy. From Monday to Friday, I have to get up at 5:40 every morning, and I get home at 19:10 every night. Sometimes, on weekends I am free. I can sleep late. But every afternoon I must do my homework. I'm busy with my homework. If I finish doing my homework, I can play computer games, badminton, and so on. Last Wednesday, my school hold a Writing Competition, and I got the first prize. And my calssmates gave me some presents. How happy I was! What about you? Are you busy with your study? Are you free? Can you speak Chinese?
As for ***, she is a primary school's student. Do you know? Her teachers like her very much. She is very clever.
Please tell me about your things. And please write back to me soon. Thanks!

Answer 1

Hello Daniel and your family! How are you? Do you know me? I couldn't write any letters these months because I was very busy. From Monday to Friday, I have to get up at 5:40 every morning, and I get home at 19:10 every night. Sometimes, on weekends I am free and so I can sleep late. But every afternoon I must do my homework. I'm busy with my homework. If I finish my homework early, I can play computer games, badminton, and so on. Last Wednesday, my school held a Writing Competition, and I got the first prize. My classmates gave me some prizes. How happy I was! What about you? Are you also busy with your study? Do you have free time? Can you speak Chinese?
As for ***, she is a primary school student. Do you know that Her teachers like her very much? She is very clever.
Please tell me more about you. And please reply soon. Thanks!

Answer 2

Hello后面应加“，”，第六行“hold”应是过去式“held”。