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希望帮助我翻一下这段自我介绍，我英语不太好 翻译的太生硬 中国式英语，我需要人工翻译而不是软件翻译

早上好，我是马本中，也可以叫我mark ，来自旅游管理三班我很荣幸来参加这次面试，谢谢您给我这次机会
首先，据我了解，瑞吉酒店是国际奢华五星级酒店的代表，对于我来说能够进入瑞吉是我的荣幸，在瑞吉立足是我的目标，然而人才班的出现是一次千载难逢的机会，毫无疑问，我希望成为一名优秀的酒店管理者，我渴望在这里学习。
既然是人才班，肯定要求我们要有较强的学习能力。我在校的成绩还不错，并考取了人力师和国家计算机二级，有一定的计算机办公能力。另外我深知英语对于酒店工作的重要性，现在正在外学习口语。
此外在实践中学习是从事酒店工作的重要方式，上大学以来，我在寒暑假坚持到酒店做小时工，说实在的，挺辛苦但也很有趣。从事酒店考验的是员工的综合素质，我在大学参加两个社团并担任部长，参加了很多活动，比如拉过一千元的赞助，为其他社团进行拓展训练，在导游风采大赛中取得了三等奖，等等。
一个人的性格很大程度上决定了这个人适不适合从事某方面的工作，我是一个非常乐观，真诚，积极向上的人。在处事上，我是一个细心，严谨的人，而且做事投入，不拖泥带水，实践能力很强，所以我的座右铭就是。另外我喜欢团队合作，非常有团荣誉感。
既然是自我介绍，不能光说自己的好话，有时候我做事不够果断，考虑过多，对于突发事情容易慌张，可能这也是我缺少经验的原因，但我也相信会在以后的学习和实习中得到改善。
说了这么多，我就是希望进入人才班，我一定不会让您失望，因为我渴望去学习，希望以后成为一位出色的酒店管理者。
ps 采纳保证增加奖励！

Answer 1

Good morning, my name is MaBenzhong, you can call me Mark，I 'm from class three, tourism management，and I am honored to have the opportunity to attend this interview.
First of all,as far as I know,the st. Regis hotel is the representative of international luxury five-star hotel, It's my honor to be a member of the St. Regis，and do a good job at Regis is my goal. The emergence of talent class is a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity，no doubt about it, I hope to be a good hotel manager, I am eager to study here.
Since it is a talent class, certainly requires us to have a strong learning ability. I did well at school,and I am eligible for the human resources Division and passed the National Computer Rank Examination of level 2, I have office computer skills.In addition I know the importance of English in the hotel work, and now I am studying the spoken language in my spare time.

Learning in practice is an important way to work in the hotel,Since college, I insist on doing hourly work in the hotel during my winter and summer vacations.To be honestly, it is very hard but also very interesting.The hotel work requires comprehensive quality of staff,I participated in two student associations in the University and served as a minister, took part in many activities,such as getting 1000 yuan of sponsership, doing some expand training to other mass organizations, and winning the third prize in the talent competition, and so on.
如果你觉得可以，我就继续翻译

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好棒！可以可以 继续吧😁

追答

好的，上文最后一行in the talent competition，改为in the tour guide talent competition.
A person's character largely determines wether the person is not suitable for a job or not. I am a very optimistic, sincere and positive people, I work carefully and rigorously, earnestly but not dilatorily. I have a strong practical ability, so my motto is（缺少座右铭的内容）. Moreover， I like the team cooperation and have a great sense of teamwork.
Just like a coin has two sides, since it is a self introduction, I cannot only say my merits. Sometimes I am not decisive enough. For the lack of experience, I may consider too much when encounter difficulties and tend to panic when faced with unexpected things. but I also believe that this situation will be improved in the future study and practice. I hope to enter the talent class, and I will not let you down, because I am eager to learn, and strive to become a good hotel manager.
有些句子的说法我做了些调整，因为我觉得这么表达可能会更好一点。

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太谢谢你了！非常满意 。座右铭 不是有机会才做 而是做了才有机会