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AnUnforgettableWeekendForme,lastXmaswasunforggetable.ItwasSaturday.Boardersdecidedtoo... An Unforgettable Weekend

For me, last Xmas was unforggetable.
It was Saturday. Boarders decided to out having some fun.
At about 8 o’clock in the morning, George , Lois, Rabbit and I “ran away” from school.
First ,we went to the KFC and had breakfast. Then wo went to the cinema. We saw the New Year greeting film——Sacrifice. It is a solemn and stirring tragedy. It made us feel sad. We think Chen Kaige is an outstanding director.
After lunch, we went to the West Lake. Originally, we decided to visit the mid-lake pavilion and appreciate the snow, but the pleasure-boat ticket is too expensive. As you know, because of the Xmas, many things were more expensive than in normal times. So we selected rowing a boat by ourselves. It was fun.
At about 4:30 pm, we came back to school.
Oh, the air in city makes me feel free!
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unforggetable是错的,应该是unforgettable.
Boarders decided to out having some fun这句,应是Boarders decided to go out to have some fun. "out"作动词意思是"伸出".
and had breakfast这句错了,应是"had a breakfast"
Then wo went to the cinema里的wo应是we吧?
Sacrifice加个书名号好一些.
We think Chen Kaige...错了,应是We thought...
appreciate the snow前要加to,因为是and连接的...
the pleasure-boat ticket is too expensive又是时态错误,is改was
more expensive than in normal times中,应在than后加which
the air in city makes me feel...就不说了,还是时态.make改made

(其他的错误不太好打了,你注意一下搭配上的错误吧. )
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短文嘞?
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哪篇?
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还不错 基本没有严格的错误
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Boarders decided to go out to have some fun.
many things were more expensive than those in normal times.
selected rowing a boat 这个语法好像有点问题,我个人建议用chose to row a boat.
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