Question

高分悬赏,汉译英

你是我的天使
我不能容忍任何人对你的亵渎
若有人胆敢尝试玷污你的圣洁
我将用他的鲜血来填补我空虚的心灵

就是这段
求高手翻译成英语
说实话
我英语很烂
但希望您能认真的帮我把他翻译过来
谢谢

Answer 1

You are my angel, I can not tolerate anyone who dares to try to smear you if you desecrated the sanctity of his own blood, I will I fill the emptiness of souls--------- 你是我的天使
我不能容忍任何人对你的亵渎
若有人胆敢尝试玷污你的圣洁
我将用他的鲜血来填补我空虚的心灵
You are,my angel
I can never abide anybody blaspheme you
If there is anyone dare to sully your sanctity
With his blood being filled up my empty soul
You are my angel
I cannot tolerate anybody to profane to you
if some people dare to attempt tarnish your saint
I will use his blood to fill my void heart
My angel you are being,
Tolerating to you no blasphemy,
Dared to staine your sancitity,
May his blood fill my heart's empty.
鉴以诗歌题材，
我选用了压韵译法，
还有否定转移，倒装，虚拟等句型，
最后一句中文空虚的心灵，
英文趋为心灵的空虚。
你是我的天使
you are my angel
我不能容忍任何人对你的亵渎
i won't tolerate any blasphemy against you
若有人胆敢尝试玷污你的圣洁
if anyone dares to stain your chastity(sanctity)
我将用他的鲜血来填补我空虚的心灵
i will use his blood to fill my empty soul.
You are my angel
I can't is tolerant of anyone to besmirch you
If someone dare to try to compromise you of sanctity
I will fill up my empty mind with his blood
angel I cannot tolerate any person to you to blaspheme
if some people will dare to attempt tarnish you to be holy I to use
his blood to fill my void mind
Is this section asks the master translation English to say the
truth I English is very rotten but hoped you can earnest help me to
translate him thank

Answer 2

My angel you are being,
Tolerating to you no blasphemy,
Dared to staine your sancitity,
May his blood fill my heart's empty.

鉴以诗歌题材，
我选用了压韵译法，
还有否定转移，倒装，虚拟等句型，
最后一句中文空虚的心灵，
英文趋为心灵的空虚。

Answer 3

你是我的天使
you are my angel
我不能容忍任何人对你的亵渎
i won't tolerate any blasphemy against you
若有人胆敢尝试玷污你的圣洁
if anyone dares to stain your chastity(sanctity)
我将用他的鲜血来填补我空虚的心灵
i will use his blood to fill my empty soul.

Answer 4

You are my angel, I can not tolerate anyone who dares to try to smear you if you desecrated the sanctity of his own blood, I will I fill the emptiness of souls--------- 你是我的天使
我不能容忍任何人对你的亵渎
若有人胆敢尝试玷污你的圣洁
我将用他的鲜血来填补我空虚的心灵

Answer 5

You are,my angel
I can never abide anybody blaspheme you
If there is anyone dare to sully your sanctity
With his blood being filled up my empty soul