Question

请高手帮我修改语法错误。（急，在线等）

Some kind of love, does not need to wait。I don’t know
that between a dissolute man and a frivolous woman may have the love, the life track playing tricks on arranges us to meet the other, perhaps is the reason which we is destined.
The amativeness should not the love shackles, actually turned a heavy stone on our body, first only I carry it , now actually takes lifting which we goes all out. Is tired, may rest, happiness which actually is unable to remove the heavy cloth wrapper, in the package is installing is not oneself clings to, but is the life irons on the heart the mark. The love is not the person is living complete, the person actually may live for the love, even if live is not certainly relaxed, understands the heart which loves actually to be allowed to be free. The love, is lonely the promise which promises for us, to choose by does not have us.
The fear light, actually longs for warm; Expects the love, actually cannot approach. In darkness pulls two ice-cold hands mutually to warm up, that pitiful temperature still attentive, in the heart silently tells oneself, this is in the life sorrow, does not call the love. Traces black is coming out, but also must along not have the bright the road to go back, I do not would rather dropping, duplicates that unnecessary speech: "Do you afraid of that you back by yourself?" " I am afraid could l come back!"
Missing at nonchalant time multiplies the spread, are more, we only are duplicating the simple regards. "Where are you at?" "Outside." "What is busy?" "Is thinking you!" "Has the matter?" "Is all right." The heart, changes warmly in the short regards sound...
Finally one day, you confuse ask me: "Actually do we calculate what, sweetheart? Too bored! Spouse? Too funny!" No doubt is heavy, or said in the heart speech: "We are any are certainly unimportant, I only knew I love you!" You are smiling or are crying? I love dearly you to smile chillily beautifully, is gratified your happy tear. Recent you are I farthest love, you said likes being allowed in the heart the eternal, but do not have to wait for. Does not dare the wild hope often to accompany together, because of this nearly in very close horizon; Does not need mutually to pledge any, we only can be the convict which loves.
我2点以前就要，谁在2点之前给我把全篇拿出来了，我马上把分给他，再送100分。

Answer 1

Some kind（kinds) of love, does not need to wait(+for)。I don’t know
that(how to have the love between a dissolut man and a dissolute woman ,缺分句主语) between a dissolute man and a frivolous woman may have the love, (.)(T)the life track（track of life)(+is) playing tricks on arranges (arranging)us to meet the other, (and)perhaps(that) is the reason which we is destined.
The amativeness should not(+be) the love shackles, (+which is)actually turned(turning to) a heavy stone on our body(shoulder), (Firstly)first only I (+can)carry it , (+but it)now actually takes lifting which we goes all out. (It is)Is tired(tiring), (and I must have a rest)may rest, (+and the)happiness which actually is unable to remove the heavy cloth wrapper, (+what)in the package is installing is not (the one that)oneself clings to, but is the life irons on the heart (+of)the mark. The love is not (+that)the person is living complete(completely), (+but is)the person actually may live for the love, (E)even if live is not certainly relaxed, (+but understanding) understands the heart which loves actually (should)to be allowed (and)to be free. The love, is lonely the promise which promises for(不要） us,（+is ） to choose by （not having）does not have us.
The fear（fearful） light, actually longs for warm（warmth）; Expects(Expecting) the love, (which)actually cannot approach. In darkness pulls(pulling) two ice-cold hands mutually to warm up, (+but)that pitiful temperature still attentive(+s), (+and)in the heart silently tells(telling) oneself, this is in the life sorrow(sorrow of life), (which should not be called)does not call the love. Traces(Tracing) black is coming out, but also must(not) along not have(having) the bright(of) the road to go back, I do not would rather (drop)dropping, (and)duplicates(duplicating) that unnecessary speech(words): "Do(Are) you afraid of that you (your)(+returning)back by yourself?" " I am afraid (whether i could come back)could l come back!"
Missing at nonchalant time multiplies the spread, (what's more )are more, we only are(are only) duplicating the simple regards. "Where are you at(going)?" "Outside." "What is busy?" "Is (不要）thinking you!" "（What's the matter?）Has the matter?" "Is(不要） all right." The heart, changes(changing) warmly(warm) in the short regards sound(sounds)...
Finally one day, you confuse (confusedly)ask me: "Actually do we calculate what(what actually do we calculate?), sweetheart? Too bored(boring)! Spouse? Too funny!" No doubt(+it) is heavy, or said(saying) in the heart(hearted) speech(words): "We are any(Anyong we are) are(is) certainly unimportant, (+but)I only knew(know) I love you!" You are smiling or are(不要) crying? I love dearly（dearly love ） you to smile chillily（+or） beautifully, （+and it)is gratified (+for )your happy tear. Recent(Recently ) you are I (my)farthest love, (+and)you said likes being allowed in the heart (+is)the(不要) eternal, but do(不要) not have(having) to wait for. Does(Do) not dare the wild hope (+which is )often to accompany together, because of (不要)this (+is)nearly in very close horizon; Does not need mutually to(不要) pledge (+to)any(each other), (+and what)we only can be (+is) the convict(convited) which(what) loves.

=---------------------(不要)指前一个单词删除
（）指改换 （+）指加上

==问题补充：我2点以前就要，谁在2点之前给我把全篇拿出来了，我马上把分给他，再送100分。====

hehe, show me ~

Answer 2

too funny。too好象是用在句末，我觉得too应该为so

Answer 3

too funny。too好象是用在句末的吧，我觉得too应该为so

Answer 4

I don’t know
that between a dissolute man and a frivolous woman may have love 应为I don’t know the love that
betwwen dissolute man and a frivolous woman may have

Answer 5

第一句wait后加 for